App— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 発音の誤り（"lying"はおそらく"Line"の誤り）や文法の誤りがあり、語彙の選択も不自然です。より正確な単語を使い、文法的に正しい文章を作ることが必要です。また、回答は簡潔で自然な表現にすることが望ましいです。

Exemplo: I often use social media apps like Line and Instagram. They help me stay connected with my friends and make me feel refreshed.

Sugestão: 文法の誤り（"These platform"は"This platform"が正しい）や不自然な表現があります。情報を整理して、より自然で流暢な文章にすることが必要です。具体的な理由や詳細を加えると良いでしょう。

Exemplo: I'm usually interested in Instagram because this platform allows me to stay updated with my news and my friends' news. I enjoy browsing it every day.

Sugestão: 文法的に不完全で意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。文章を完結にし、正しい文法で表現することが必要です。具体的な例を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

Exemplo: I usually learn about new apps when I talk with my friends. For example, I found out about Instagram through a friend.

Sugestão: "investigation analysis apps"という表現は不自然で、正しい語彙を使う必要があります。また、理由をもう少し詳しく説明すると良いでしょう。

Exemplo: In the future, I would like to use investment analysis apps because I'm interested in investing, but I don't know how to use these tools yet.

× I always use social media services like lying and instagrams.

✓ I always use social media services like Line and Instagram.

The words 'lying' and 'instagrams' are incorrect. 'Line' is a proper noun for a social media app, and 'Instagram' is singular and should not be pluralized. This is a singular and plural issue because 'instagrams' incorrectly pluralizes a proper noun.

× It allows me to interact with other people and I feel refreshed.

✓ They allow me to interact with other people and I feel refreshed.

The subject 'social media services' is plural, so the verb should be 'allow' instead of 'allows'. This is a third person singular issue where the verb does not agree with the plural subject.

× I'm always interested in Instagram. These platform allows me to stay, update my news and my friends news.

✓ I'm always interested in Instagram. This platform allows me to stay updated on my news and my friends' news.

'These platform' is incorrect because 'platform' is singular and should be preceded by 'this'. Also, 'friends news' should be possessive 'friends' news'. This is a singular and plural issue and incorrect use of possessive form.

× These platform allows me to stay, update my news and my friends news.

✓ This platform allows me to stay updated on my news and my friends' news.

The phrase 'stay, update my news' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'stay updated on' something. Also, possessive form 'friends' news' is needed. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and possessive form.

× I always enjoy watching this app.

✓ I always enjoy using this app.

You don't 'watch' an app; you 'use' it. Also, 'this app' is singular and correct. The verb 'watching' is inappropriate here, so this is a verb usage issue related to singular/plural context.

× I often know different apps when I talk with my friends.

✓ I often learn about different apps when I talk with my friends.

The verb 'know' is not used with 'different apps' in this context. The correct verb is 'learn about'. This is an incorrect use of verb and preposition.

× For example. I knew the Instagram when I connected with.

✓ For example, I learned about Instagram when I connected with my friends.

'Knew' is past tense of 'know' but is not appropriate here; 'learned about' is better. Also, the sentence is incomplete ('connected with' whom?). This is a past tense issue and sentence structure error.

× For example. I knew the Instagram when I connected with.

✓ For example, I learned about Instagram when I connected with my friends.

The phrase 'connected with' needs an object, such as 'my friends'. Also, 'knew the Instagram' is incorrect; 'learned about Instagram' is correct. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure.

× I would like to use the types of investigation analysis apps in the future.

✓ I would like to use investment analysis apps in the future.

'The types of investigation analysis apps' is awkward and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'investment analysis apps'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and word choice.

× That's because I'm interested in investment, but I don't know how to use it.

✓ That's because I'm interested in investment, but I don't know how to use them.

'Investment' is uncountable, but 'apps' is plural, so 'them' refers to the apps. Using 'it' is incorrect here. This is an incorrect use of pronouns.