App— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and correct minor grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the apps, then add one short reason using a linking word. Avoid repetition (e.g., "I find" twice).

Exemplo: Recently I've used Opera, Facebook, WhatsApp and Instagram. I like these apps because they help me keep in touch with friends and follow news, so I can stay socially active.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and group examples by type, using linking words (for example, "for communication" or "for entertainment"). Correct small phrasing errors like "to" at the end. Keep it to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: I'm usually interested in communication and entertainment apps. For communication, I use WhatsApp and Messenger, and for entertainment I prefer YouTube and Facebook because they provide videos and updates.

Sugestão: Organize the answer into a topic sentence plus brief steps, and correct grammar (use articles, verb forms). Use linking words like "first" and "then" to make the process clear. Be specific about actions (search, read reviews, download).

Exemplo: I usually find apps through the Play Store or App Store. First, I search for the app by name, then I read reviews and check screenshots, and finally I download it if it looks useful.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence saying which apps you want to try and why. Use linking words ("for example", "because") and avoid vague phrases like "several features"—be specific about which features appeal to you.

Exemplo: In the future I'd like to try Snapchat and Messenger Lite because they offer lightweight messaging and privacy features. I also plan to use Google Chrome more for its fast browsing and useful extensions.

× I have used several apps such as Opera, Facebook, WhatsApp and also Insta and I find I found it very interesting and it is a great way to stay active in social communication.

✓ I have used several apps such as Opera, Facebook, WhatsApp and Instagram, and I find them very interesting; they are a great way to stay active in social communication.

Mixed tenses and incorrect reference: the sentence uses present perfect (I have used) then incorrectly mixes 'I find I found'. Use a consistent present tense for ongoing opinions (I find) and plural pronoun 'them' to refer back to several apps. Also replace 'Insta' with 'Instagram' for formality and join clauses clearly. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and match pronouns to plural nouns. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Actually I'm interested in different sorts of apps including WhatsApp, Messenger which are well known chatting apps and apart from that I also prefer YouTube and Facebook to.

✓ Actually I'm interested in different kinds of apps, including WhatsApp and Messenger, which are well-known chat apps, and I also prefer YouTube and Facebook.

Several issues: punctuation and conjunctions were incorrect and the phrase 'Facebook to' is ungrammatical. Use commas to set off the relative clause 'which are well-known chat apps'. Use 'chat apps' rather than 'chatting apps'. Remove the unnecessary 'to' after Facebook. Suggestion: simplify structure and place commas correctly. Grammar_problem_type_id: 16

× I find out different apps by using play store or App Store where a plenty of apps available and I click on the search button and gave the name of apps and I find it and I download use it.

✓ I find different apps by using the Play Store or App Store, where a plenty of apps are available; I click the search button, type the app name, find it, and download and use it.

Multiple preposition and verb form errors: 'find out' is better as 'find' in this context; 'play store' should be 'the Play Store'; 'where a plenty of apps available' needs 'are' and 'a plenty of' is incorrect — use 'plenty of' or 'many'. 'Gave the name' should be 'type the name' or 'enter the name'. Also sequence verbs need parallel forms: 'find it, and download and use it.' Suggestion: use correct articles, replace 'find out' with 'find', and maintain parallel verb forms. Grammar_problem_type_id: 11

× In the future I'd like to use several kinds of apps including Snapchat and Messenger Lite and also Google Chrome which would be very useful for me and it would be available several features.

✓ In the future I'd like to use several kinds of apps, including Snapchat and Messenger Lite, and also Google Chrome, which would be very useful for me and would offer several features.

Awkward future construction and improper verb and phrase choice: 'it would be available several features' is ungrammatical. Use 'would offer' or 'has' to indicate available features. Keep modal 'would' consistent and refer to 'Google Chrome' with 'would offer several features.' Suggestion: use 'offer' for features and maintain correct clause structure. Grammar_problem_type_id: 7