App— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the app(s), then add one or two specific details about how you use them. Avoid fillers and grammatical errors (use past tense correctly, plural/singular agreement). Use linking words to make the answer coherent.

Exemplo: I have recently used Instagram a lot. I usually use it to chat with friends and check messages, and sometimes I scroll through photos and short videos to relax.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence listing the types of apps, using correct prepositions and plurals. Then add a brief reason for your interest with a linking word (because, since). Keep to 2–4 sentences maximum.

Exemplo: I'm usually interested in social and messaging apps, such as Facebook Messenger, Instagram and Snapchat. I like them because they let me stay in touch with friends and share photos quickly.

Sugestão: Answer directly: explain one or two main ways you discover apps, using linking words (for example, when, so). Use simple correct sentences and give a specific example of a friend recommendation or app store discovery.

Exemplo: I usually find out about new apps from my friends. For example, a friend recommended Snapchat to me, so I tried it and found it fun for sharing short videos.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence stating the types of apps you want to use in the future. Then give specific reasons for each app using linking words (because, so). Avoid trailing off; finish your sentences and be precise.

Exemplo: In the future I would like to continue using Instagram, Facebook and Messenger. I will use Messenger to stay in touch with friends and relatives, and Facebook to follow news and see family photos.

× I used recently Instagram apps, uh, talking with my friends, she send me a message, uh, I go there and I scrolling lots of and I forget what to do.

✓ I recently used Instagram, talking with my friends. She sent me a message, so I went there and scrolled a lot; I forgot what to do.

Multiple errors: 'used recently' placement is awkward—place adverb before main verb as 'recently used'; 'Instagram apps' should be 'Instagram' (proper noun, not plural); 'she send' is wrong tense and subject-verb form—use past 'sent' (Problem type 9 and 5 overlap, but corrected as past participle/past tense); 'I go there' should be past 'I went there' (past tense); 'I scrolling lots of' wrongly uses present participle without auxiliary—use simple past 'scrolled a lot'; 'I forget' should be past 'I forgot'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for a past event, place adverbs correctly, use correct verb forms and add linking words like 'so' for coherence.

× I'm mostly interested at our Facebook Messenger, Instagram and it snaps.

✓ I'm mostly interested in Facebook, Messenger, Instagram, and Snapchat.

Use 'interested in' not 'interested at' (preposition error). 'our Facebook Messenger' is unnecessary possessive; use app names correctly: 'Messenger' and 'Snapchat' (proper names). Also use consistent listing with commas and 'and'. Suggestion: use 'interested in' and correct app names.

× Are these 4 apps I usually used? It's me when I use.

✓ These are the four apps I usually use. They are the ones I use most often.

Original contains question form and tense mismatch. 'Are these 4 apps I usually used?' mixes present and past incorrectly; change to declarative 'These are the four apps I usually use' (present habit). 'It's me when I use' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'They are the ones I use most often.' Suggestion: use clear subject-verb-object order and consistent tense for habitual actions.

× I found out, uh, from my friends, uh, like, uh, Snapchat.

✓ I found out about Snapchat from my friends.

Use 'found out about' plus the thing you learned; original 'found out from my friends, like Snapchat' has awkward order. Place the app after 'about' and the source after 'from'. Suggestion: use 'found out about X from Y' for clarity.

× I didn't know about Snapchat, why they really doing nice time there.

✓ I didn't know about Snapchat and why people enjoyed using it there.

Mix of structures: 'didn't know' is past negative then 'why they really doing' lacks auxiliary and correct tense—should be 'why people really enjoyed' (past simple) or 'why people enjoy' depending. Also 'doing nice time' is incorrect collocation; use 'enjoyed using it' or 'had a good time'. Suggestion: keep past tense and use proper verbs and collocations.

× But when I, I met my friends used to Instagram.

✓ But when I met my friends, they used Instagram.

Original 'I met my friends used to Instagram' lacks proper clause structure. Use 'when I met my friends, they used Instagram' to show simultaneous past action. 'used to' would imply a habitual past and is unnecessary here. Suggestion: split into clauses and use correct subject for 'used'.

× Then I started to use and it's make me so more fun.

✓ Then I started to use it, and it made me have much more fun.

'Started to use' is okay but needs an object 'it'. 'it's make me' mixes present with infinitive; for past narrative use past 'it made me have more fun' or better 'it was much more fun'. Also 'so more fun' is incorrect collocation; use 'much more fun' or 'a lot more fun'. Suggestion: include objects after verbs and match tense consistently.

× It's take lots of.

✓ It took a lot of my time.

Fragment and unclear: 'It's take lots of' mixes present 'it's' with 'take' and lacks object. For past narrative use 'It took a lot of time' or 'It took up a lot of my time.' Suggestion: provide a clear subject, past tense verb, and an object/phrase indicating what was taken.

× The apps I would like to use in the future, mostly Instagram, Facebook and messenger.

✓ The apps I would like to use in the future are mostly Instagram, Facebook, and Messenger.

Sentence fragment missing linking verb 'are'. Listing apps is fine but capitalize 'Messenger'. Suggestion: use 'are' to complete the sentence and proper nouns capitalization.

× Uh, the messenger which connected with my friends and family and also relative and Facebook where I see the photos and news from the.

✓ Messenger connects me with my friends, family, and relatives, and Facebook is where I see photos and news from them.

Original has tense and preposition omissions and run-on structure. Use present tense 'connects' for general statement. Add plural 'relatives' and complete 'news from them' rather than leaving 'from the'. Suggestion: break into two clauses, use correct verbs, and finish prepositional phrases.