App— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more concise and correct some grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then list apps with brief roles. Use linking words and correct verb forms (e.g. "dedicated to"). Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Recently I've used a few apps for different purposes. For reading summaries I use Blinkist, and for social networking I use Instagram and TikTok. I also use an exercise app called Band, which is dedicated to stretching and mobility routines.

Sugestão: Combine related ideas into one clear topic sentence and expand with specific examples and linking words. Correct phrasing ("self-improvement" and "language learning") and avoid redundancy. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I'm mainly interested in self-improvement apps, such as Blinkist for reading summaries, Duolingo for language learning, and fitness apps for exercise. Besides those, I use social media like Instagram and TikTok to keep up with friends, and I sometimes play casual games to unwind.

Sugestão: Complete unfinished sentences and use clearer phrases (e.g. "I usually discover apps through searches or recommendations"). Give one or two specific methods with linking words and examples. Avoid repeating words like "books" too often.

Exemplo: I usually discover apps by searching the app store or reading online reviews. For example, when I wanted to read more, I searched for book-summary apps and found Blinkist; when I wanted to improve mobility, I looked for stretching and mobility apps with good user ratings.

Sugestão: Make the response more concise and grammatically correct. State your preference clearly, then give a reason and a specific example of the type of app you'd like to try. Use linking words (e.g. "because", "for example").

Exemplo: In the future I'd like to keep using self-improvement apps because they help me build good habits conveniently. For example, I plan to try a habit-tracking app to practice daily language study and a guided yoga app to improve flexibility.

× I have recently used Blinkist which is an app that you can listen or read to a summary of a book, and I've used Instagram, Tiktok and Band which is an exercise app dedicating to stretching.

✓ I have recently used Blinkist, which is an app that lets you listen to or read a summary of a book, and I've used Instagram, TikTok and Band, which is an exercise app dedicated to stretching.

Use of verb + -ing and participle forms was incorrect: 'listen or read to' should be 'listen to or read' and 'dedicating to' should be the past participle 'dedicated to'. Also 'lets you' is a natural phrasing. Ensure correct verb patterns: 'listen to' and adjective/participial phrase 'dedicated to'. Suggestion: learn common verb + preposition collocations (listen to, read) and use past participle for adjectival meaning (dedicated to).

× I am interested in self improvement and self development. Apps are like reading books, exercising or learning new language.

✓ I am interested in self-improvement and self-development. I like apps for reading books, exercising, or learning a new language.

The original used incorrect noun phrases and word order. 'Self improvement' and 'self development' should be hyphenated as compound adjectives/nouns. 'Apps are like reading books' is ungrammatical; use 'apps for' + gerund to show purpose. 'Learning new language' needs an article: 'a new language'. Suggestion: use 'apps for + verb-ing' to describe app functions and include articles with countable nouns ('a new language').

× I'm also into our social media apps like Instagram and Tiktok and also games for the time when I want to unwind.

✓ I'm also into social media apps like Instagram and TikTok, and games for when I want to unwind.

Use of 'our' is inappropriate in this context; the student should use neutral 'social media apps'. Also 'for the time when' is wordy—'for when' is natural. Maintain consistent punctuation and capitalization for proper nouns (TikTok). Suggestion: avoid unnecessary possessive pronouns and prefer concise time clauses ('for when').

× I usually find apps throughout or when I search for something specific.

✓ I usually find apps by browsing or when I search for something specific.

'Throughout' is incorrect here. The intended meaning is likely 'by browsing' or 'through browsing'. Use 'by' + gerund or 'when I search'. Suggestion: choose prepositions that match the verb (find apps by browsing) or use 'through' with a noun ('through recommendations').

× For example, when I wanted to read books, I search for apps that are related to books and make reading books more feasible.

✓ For example, when I want to read books, I search for apps that are related to books and make reading easier.

Tense inconsistency: 'when I wanted' (past) followed by 'I search' (present) is inconsistent. Use present simple 'when I want... I search' to describe a habitual action. Also 'make reading books more feasible' is awkward; 'make reading easier' is clearer and avoids repetition. Suggestion: keep tenses consistent for habitual actions (use present simple) and prefer concise expressions.

× Also, when I wanted to improve my mobility and my muscles, I search for.

✓ Also, when I want to improve my mobility and strength, I search for such apps.

The original sentence is incomplete ('I search for.' ends abruptly) and mixes past and present tense. Use present tense for habitual actions and complete the object: 'search for such apps'. 'My muscles' is better expressed as 'strength' in this context. Suggestion: always complete the verb's object and maintain tense consistency; replace 'my muscles' with 'strength' for natural phrasing.

× I will continue to be interested in self development or self improvement app because I would like to improve myself every day and these are really helped me in that specially it's more convenient and more feasible than any other ways I've found.

✓ I will continue to be interested in self-development or self-improvement apps because I would like to improve myself every day, and they have really helped me with that; especially, they are more convenient and practical than other ways I've found.

Multiple issues: plural/subject-verb agreement ('app' -> 'apps'), tense and verb form ('these are really helped me' incorrect; use 'they have really helped me'), word choice ('feasible' -> 'practical'), and punctuation to combine clauses. Maintain future intention 'I will continue' but use present perfect to describe past effects ('have helped'). Suggestion: ensure noun number matches context (apps), use correct verb forms for perfect aspect, and choose natural adjectives like 'practical' or 'convenient'.

× So these apps are important into my life.

✓ So these apps are important in my life.

Use of preposition 'into' is incorrect; the correct preposition with 'important' is 'in'. Suggestion: memorize common adjective + preposition collocations (important in, interested in).