Party— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by avoiding repetition and making it more natural. Instead of repeating 'leisure', you can use synonyms or rephrase. Also, try to combine your ideas into one or two sentences to sound more fluent.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy going to parties, especially clubs with my friends, as it helps me relax and unwind after a busy week.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and grammar. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to use linking words to connect ideas. Also, correct phrases like 'restriction store I could do' to 'restrictions on what I could do'.

Exemplo: I didn't attend many parties as a child because my parents were quite strict and imposed restrictions. However, I usually celebrated birthdays with my friends either at home or at a restaurant where we enjoyed delicious food.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'a numerous parties' to 'numerous parties' and improve sentence flow.

Exemplo: Yes, I have organized several parties, especially for my birthday, as it is a very special day for me and I enjoy celebrating it with friends and family.

× Yes, I usually do like to party.

✓ Yes, I usually like to party.

The phrase 'do like' is unnecessary here; 'usually like' is sufficient and more natural in English. Using 'do' for emphasis is possible but not needed in this context.

× I go to clubs with my friends so that I can get some leisure and leisure time. To relax.

✓ I go to clubs with my friends so that I can get some leisure time to relax.

The phrase 'some leisure and leisure time' is redundant; 'leisure time' alone is correct. Also, 'To relax.' is a sentence fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence.

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

The plural 'parties' is more appropriate here because 'how often' implies multiple occasions, so plural form should be used.

× I did not really party as much when I was a kid because I had really strict parents so there was some restriction store I could do.

✓ I did not really party as much when I was a kid because I had really strict parents, so there were some restrictions on what I could do.

The phrase 'there was some restriction store I could do' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'there were some restrictions on what I could do' to convey the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× But uh when I did party it was usually for birthdays and I love me and my friends usually used to either party at home or go to some restaurant and have really nice food.

✓ But when I did party, it was usually for birthdays, and my friends and I usually used to either party at home or go to a restaurant and have really nice food.

The phrase 'I love me and my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'my friends and I'. Also, 'some restaurant' is better as 'a restaurant' here. Commas are added for clarity.

× Yes, I have organized a numerous parties especially for my birthday because at that day is one of my most special day because that day is a special day for me and I like enjoying it with other people.

✓ Yes, I have organized numerous parties, especially for my birthday, because that day is one of my most special days and I like enjoying it with other people.

The article 'a' should not be used before 'numerous parties' because 'numerous' already implies plural. Also, 'at that day is one of my most special day' is incorrect; it should be 'that day is one of my most special days'. Commas improve sentence clarity.