Party— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了不喜欢派对的原因，但语法和用词有些错误，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意单复数形式（people而非peoples），并使用更自然的表达方式，如"I feel nervous around many people"。同时，句子应简洁明了，避免冗长。

Exemplo: No, I don't like parties because I feel nervous around many people. Also, after attending a party, I usually feel very tired and need some time to relax by myself.

Sugestão: 回答中时态使用不当，应使用过去时描述过去的习惯。句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，并注意时态一致。

Exemplo: When I was a kid, I had parties at my friends' houses and celebrated my birthday every year. Usually, I had about three parties a year, and we always brought cakes to share.

Sugestão: 回答中时态混用（bake应为baked），句子表达不够连贯。建议使用过去时描述过去事件，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, when I was 10, I invited my friends to my birthday party and baked a cake. Although I thought it was not very successful, everyone said the cake was really good.

× No, I don't like parties because I'm very nervous when facing people, a lot of peoples and every time after I had a party I'm very tired and needs a lot of relaxing with myself.

✓ No, I don't like parties because I'm very nervous when facing people, a lot of people, and every time after I have a party I'm very tired and need a lot of relaxing by myself.

“peoples”是复数错误，正确应为“people”，因为“people”本身就是复数形式。动词“needs”应与主语“I”保持一致，改为“need”。另外，“relaxing with myself”表达不自然，改为“relaxing by myself”更合适。

× I often have parties in my friends and my birthday parties every year and maybe it may be 3 * a year and we brought cakes to eat.

✓ I often have parties at my friends' places and birthday parties every year, maybe about 3 times a year, and we bring cakes to eat.

“in my friends”应改为“at my friends' places”，表示地点。动词时态应保持一致，描述习惯用一般现在时，“brought”应改为“bring”。“3 * a year”表达不规范，改为“3 times a year”。

× Yes, I remember when I was 10, I invited my friends for my birthday party and I bake a cake.

✓ Yes, I remember when I was 10, I invited my friends for my birthday party and I baked a cake.

描述过去的动作，动词应使用过去式，“bake”应改为“baked”。

× It is not very successful. What everyone says, it's really good.

✓ It was not very successful. But everyone said it was really good.

句子结构不完整且逻辑不清，“What everyone says”应改为“but everyone said”，并且时态应保持一致，改为过去时。