Traffic— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct vocabulary like 'crosswalks' instead of 'cross work' and avoid repeating 'so'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, you can say, 'Yes, there are many crosswalks in Kathmandu because it is a busy city. These crosswalks, along with traffic lights, help pedestrians move safely and control traffic effectively.'

Exemplo: Yes, there are many crosswalks in Kathmandu because it is a busy city. These crosswalks, along with traffic lights, help pedestrians move safely and control traffic effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'structure of Rd' and 'reach at the time'. Try to be more specific and use correct terms such as 'roads' and 'arrive on time'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, 'Although the traffic is manageable, I would like the government to build more flyovers and overpasses to reduce traffic jams and help people arrive on time.'

Exemplo: Although the traffic is manageable, I would like the government to build more flyovers and overpasses to reduce traffic jams and help people arrive on time.

× Yes, there are a lot of cross work when I leave.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks when I leave.

The word 'cross work' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'crosswalks' to match the context of multiple pedestrian crossings. This is a singular and plural issue.

× there are a lot of crosswalk along with traffic lights.

✓ there are a lot of crosswalks along with traffic lights.

The noun 'crosswalk' should be plural 'crosswalks' because it refers to multiple crossings. This is a singular and plural issue.

× So traffic lights helps to control a lot of traffic and also avoids.

✓ So traffic lights help to control a lot of traffic and also avoid accidents.

The subject 'traffic lights' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' not 'helps'. Also, the verb 'avoids' is incomplete without an object; adding 'accidents' clarifies the meaning. This is a third person singular issue.

× The traffic are fine but I would like to change the structure of Rd.

✓ The traffic is fine but I would like to change the structure of the road.

'Traffic' is a singular uncountable noun and should be paired with 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'Rd.' should be expanded to 'road' with the definite article 'the'. This is a singular and plural issue and article error.

× to help people reach at the time and to avoid the traffic jams.

✓ to help people reach on time and to avoid traffic jams.

The phrase 'reach at the time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'reach on time'. Also, 'the traffic jams' should be 'traffic jams' without 'the' for general reference. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and article error.