Traffic— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as 'crossbar much safer'. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas unnecessarily. Aim to provide a clear topic sentence followed by a supporting detail using linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, there are quite a few crosswalks around my neighbourhood, particularly near schools. This makes it much safer for pedestrians to cross the street, especially children.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases, such as 'long release' and 'public private transport'. Try to organise your ideas more clearly, use linking words to connect your points, and use accurate vocabulary related to traffic and pollution. Also, avoid repetition and aim for concise sentences.

Exemplo: Definitely, I would like to reduce traffic congestion during peak hours because it causes long delays and increases pollution. Therefore, I believe using public transport is better than private cars since it helps lower emissions and eases traffic.

× These crossbar much safer to cross the street.

✓ These crosswalks are much safer to cross the street.

The word 'crossbar' is incorrect; the correct term is 'crosswalks'. Also, the sentence lacks the verb 'are' to link the subject and the adjective phrase. The adjective 'much safer' needs a linking verb to form a correct sentence.

× I like to change congestion during peak hours, which causes a long release and increases pollutions.

✓ I would like to change the congestion during peak hours, which causes long delays and increases pollution.

The phrase 'I like to change' is incorrect in this context; 'I would like to change' expresses desire properly. 'A long release' is incorrect; the correct term is 'long delays'. 'Pollutions' is uncountable and should be 'pollution'. Also, 'the congestion' specifies the particular congestion being discussed.

× So I think the public transport is much better than the personal transport because it increases the more pollution and we use public private transport.

✓ So I think public transport is much better than private transport because personal transport causes more pollution, and we should use public transport.

The phrase 'it increases the more pollution' is incorrect; it should be 'personal transport causes more pollution'. 'Public private transport' is confusing; it should be 'public transport'. Also, 'the public transport' and 'the personal transport' are better without 'the' in this context. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.