Traffic— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?
Candidato
Yes, there are a lot of crosswalk. It allows people to go the other side of the road faster.
Examinador
Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?
Candidato
I would ask people to rely less on the private vehicle and use more pub public transport to reduce the traffic congestion and this also help with.
Avaliação
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Part 1
Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: ในคำตอบนี้ ควรใช้คำว่า 'crosswalks' ให้ถูกต้องในรูปพหูพจน์ และเพิ่มรายละเอียดเพื่อทำให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น อธิบายว่าทำไม crosswalks ถึงสำคัญ และใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค
Exemplo: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood, which help pedestrians cross the road safely and quickly. Because of these crosswalks, people feel more secure when walking in the area.
Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: คำตอบนี้ควรแก้ไขคำผิด เช่น 'pub public transport' เป็น 'public transport' และควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ พร้อมเชื่อมโยงเหตุผลและผลลัพธ์อย่างชัดเจน นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบมีความสมเหตุสมผลและครบถ้วน
Exemplo: I would encourage people to rely less on private vehicles and use public transport more often because this can reduce traffic congestion significantly. Moreover, it helps to decrease air pollution in the area.
Gramática
× Yes, there are a lot of crosswalk.
✓ Yes, there are a lot of crosswalks.
The noun 'crosswalk' is countable and plural here, so it should be 'crosswalks' to agree with 'a lot of'. The error is a singular and plural mismatch.
× It allows people to go the other side of the road faster.
✓ They allow people to go to the other side of the road faster.
The pronoun 'It' refers to a singular noun, but 'crosswalks' is plural, so 'They' is correct. Also, the preposition 'to' is needed before 'the other side'. This is a pronoun and preposition usage error.
× I would ask people to rely less on the private vehicle and use more pub public transport to reduce the traffic congestion and this also help with.
✓ I would ask people to rely less on private vehicles and use more public transport to reduce traffic congestion, and this would also help.
'Vehicle' should be plural 'vehicles' to match 'people' relying on multiple vehicles. 'Pub public' is a typo and should be 'public'. 'Traffic congestion' does not need 'the'. The phrase 'this also help with' is incomplete and should be 'this would also help'. These are quantifier, article, and sentence structure errors.
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