Traffic— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答有些冗长且不够直接，建议开头直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子补充细节，避免语法错误，如“heavy traffic”应为“heavy traffic congestion”。

Exemplo: Yes, there are many crosswalks around my neighborhood. They are especially busy during rush hours because of the heavy traffic.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“too sink”应为“too narrow”，建议使用更准确的词汇，并且结构上要更清晰，先给出观点，再用具体细节支持。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to improve the pedestrian roads because they are too narrow and uncomfortable to walk on. Also, I think the crossing time at traffic lights should be longer to ensure safety.

× Every time I returned home I felt it was such a heavy traffic.

✓ Every time I return home, I feel there is such heavy traffic.

这里的时间状语是“Every time”，表示习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，而不是过去时。"returned"和"felt"应改为"return"和"feel"。

× I think there are something need to be changed.

✓ I think there is something that needs to be changed.

"something"是不可数代词，应该用单数形式，谓语动词也应使用单数形式"is"和"needs"。

× the road is too sink and difficult for people to walk

✓ the road is too narrow and difficult for people to walk on

"sink"是动词，错误用作形容词，应改为形容词"narrow"。此外，动词"walk"后应加介词"on"。

× I think you need to increase the length.

✓ I think the length needs to be increased.

这里主语应是"the length"，而不是"you"，且表达更正式，使用被动语态更合适。