Traffic— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan agak bertele-tele. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang lebih langsung dan terstruktur dengan kalimat topik yang jelas, diikuti oleh detail pendukung yang spesifik. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Exemplo: No, there are not many crosswalks in my area because it mainly consists of a large street designed for cars to pass through quickly. Therefore, pedestrians usually have to be careful when crossing.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda terputus dan kurang lengkap. Usahakan untuk menyampaikan ide secara lengkap dan jelas dengan kalimat yang terstruktur. Gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide dan hindari pengulangan kata. Berikan alasan atau contoh spesifik untuk mendukung pendapat Anda.

Exemplo: Absolutely. I would like to increase the availability of public transportation so that people can commute more easily. This change would help reduce traffic congestion and pollution in my area.

× In the place where I live there's not a lot of crosswalk in the street because it's only a large a large St. and on the street just for the cars passing by and.

✓ In the place where I live, there aren't a lot of crosswalks in the street because it's only a large street and the street is just for cars passing by.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'there's' (there is) with the plural noun 'crosswalks', which is a singular/plural agreement error (Problem Type 3). Also, 'crosswalk' should be plural to match 'a lot of'. The phrase 'a large a large St.' is redundant and unclear; it should be 'a large street'. The sentence structure is improved by clarifying that the street is only for cars passing by.

× Absolutely. First thing is I want to deploy, umm, a larger, a larger amount of public transportation to enable people move, uh, commute from one place to other places with public transportation. So it reduce the amount of.

✓ Absolutely. The first thing is I want to deploy a larger amount of public transportation to enable people to move, uh, commute from one place to other places using public transportation. So it reduces the amount of traffic.

The sentence misses the infinitive 'to' before 'move', which is necessary after 'enable' (Problem Type 4). Also, 'a larger amount of public transportation' is acceptable but 'a larger number of public transportation options' might be clearer. The verb 'reduce' should be 'reduces' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (Problem Type 2). The sentence is incomplete and needs completion for clarity.