Traffic— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng đúng (ví dụ: 'crosswalk' thay vì 'crossword'), tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu phức tạp không cần thiết. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: There are not many crosswalks near my house because I live in a private condominium behind an apartment complex. Since the area is quite private, there is little public traffic and few strangers passing through. Therefore, the need for crosswalks is limited.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi về giao thông và tránh lạc đề. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về giao thông, ví dụ như vấn đề bạn muốn thay đổi hoặc giữ nguyên. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp.

Exemplo: I am quite satisfied with the traffic situation in my neighborhood because it is usually quiet and not crowded. However, I would like to see better street lighting to improve safety at night.

× Well I think not many crossword near my house that count because I live in a private condominium which located behind an apartment complex.

✓ Well, I think not many crosswalks near my house count because I live in a private condominium which is located behind an apartment complex.

The word 'crossword' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'crosswalks' since it refers to multiple pedestrian crossings. Also, 'which located' lacks the verb 'is' to form the correct relative clause. The sentence needs plural noun agreement and proper verb usage.

× So this area is quite private and not many public traffic and stranger passing through.

✓ So this area is quite private and not much public traffic and few strangers pass through.

'Public traffic' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'much' instead of 'many'. 'Stranger' should be plural 'strangers' because it refers to multiple unknown people. Also, the verb 'passing' should be changed to 'pass' to agree with the plural subject. The definite article 'the' is not needed before 'public traffic' here.

× Therefore the need of crosswalk is quite limited.

✓ Therefore, the need for crosswalks is quite limited.

'Crosswalk' should be plural 'crosswalks' because it refers to the general need for multiple crosswalks. Also, the preposition 'of' is incorrect here; 'need for' is the correct collocation.

× Well, I must say that I'm quite happy with the atmosphere and the public situation around my neighborhood because I'm quite an introvert person so I don't like crowded and noisy place.

✓ Well, I must say that I'm quite happy with the atmosphere and the public situation around my neighborhood because I'm quite an introverted person, so I don't like crowded and noisy places.

'Introvert' should be the adjective form 'introverted' to describe the person. 'Place' should be plural 'places' because it refers to general locations. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.

× That what many stranger and public traffic to have said.

✓ That is what many strangers and public traffic have said.

'Stranger' should be plural 'strangers' to agree with 'many'. The phrase 'to have said' is incorrect; the present perfect 'have said' is appropriate here. Also, 'public traffic' is uncountable and should be treated as singular.

× Also I really love the convenience around the area.

✓ Also, I really love the convenience around the area.

A comma is needed after 'Also' to separate the introductory word from the main clause for better readability.