TrafficPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Are there a lot of crosswalks around the placewhere you live?

Candidato

No, I don't think there many crosswalker near my place. I think the road uh over the car or bicycle to use the people just walk on the very small Rd. so that it's very secure.

Examinador

Is there anything you would like to change aboutthe traffic in your area?

Candidato

Yes, there has a drastic change in my area. In the past the popular transformation is not very development, just only a bus. But now we have MRT and so we can go many place.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Are there a lot of crosswalks around the place where you live?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,导致意思难以理解。建议你在回答时注意主谓一致,使用正确的词汇,并且尽量简洁明了地表达观点。可以先直接回答问题,然后用一两句具体细节支持你的观点。

Exemplo: No, there are not many crosswalks near my home. People usually walk on small roads shared with cars and bicycles, which makes it quite safe.

Is there anything you would like to change about the traffic in your area?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了交通变化的观点,但语法和词汇使用不准确,句子结构不完整。建议你先直接回答问题,然后用具体细节说明变化,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, the traffic in my area has changed drastically. In the past, buses were the only public transport, but now we have an MRT system, which allows us to travel to many places more conveniently.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× No, I don't think there many crosswalker near my place.

No, I don't think there are many crosswalks near my place.

这里缺少了动词are,且crosswalker应为复数形式crosswalks,因为表示多个斑马线。缺少动词和名词单复数错误属于语法错误。

There be issue

× No, I don't think there many crosswalker near my place.

No, I don't think there are many crosswalks near my place.

句中缺少be动词are,正确的there be结构应为there are,表示存在多个斑马线。

Sentence structure errors

× I think the road uh over the car or bicycle to use the people just walk on the very small Rd. so that it's very secure.

I think the road is used by cars or bicycles, so people just walk on the very small road. Therefore, it's very safe.

原句结构混乱,缺少谓语动词,且表达不清晰。需要调整句子结构,使主谓宾明确,表达更通顺。

Singular and plural issue

× just only a bus.

just only one bus.

bus前缺少数量词one,表示只有一辆公交车。

Past tense issue

× Yes, there has a drastic change in my area.

Yes, there has been a drastic change in my area.

表示过去发生的变化,应该用现在完成时has been,表示从过去到现在的变化。

Singular and plural issue

× But now we have MRT and so we can go many place.

But now we have MRT, so we can go to many places.

place应为复数places,表示多个地方;go后面需要介词to,表示去某地。

Vocabulário

ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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