Traffic— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct collocations (e.g., “crosswalks” and “pedestrian safety”), correct minor grammar (e.g., “there are a number of” not “there are number of”), and avoid unclear phrases like “course works.” Link your points briefly with a connector such as “because” or “so.”

Exemplo: Yes, there are many crosswalks near my home because the local council prioritises pedestrian safety. For example, they have painted several zebra crossings near schools and installed traffic lights, which helps reduce accidents and makes it easier for people to walk around.

Sugestão: Organise your response: give a clear topic sentence saying what you would change, then provide one or two specific reasons and a brief example. Use correct grammar and smoother phrasing (e.g., “there are a number of vehicles,” “it is difficult to reach our destination on time”). Keep to 2–4 sentences and use linking words such as “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I would like to reduce traffic congestion in my area because there are often too many vehicles on the road. For instance, during rush hour it can take twice as long to reach work or school, so I think the council should improve public transport and create car-free zones near the town centre to ease the problem.

× Definitely, there are a lot of crosswalks around the place where I live because in our local authority they are very responsible about public security.

✓ Definitely, there are a lot of crosswalks around the place where I live because our local authority is very responsible for public safety.

The original uses 'in our local authority they are' which is awkward and uses 'about public security' which is not the usual collocation. Change to 'our local authority is' to provide correct subject-verb structure and 'responsible for public safety' uses the correct preposition and noun collocation. Suggestion: Use 'our local authority is responsible for public safety' for clear and natural phrasing.

× As a result, they frequently try to spread awareness among people to cross in course works which help them to reduce traffic accident.

✓ As a result, they frequently try to raise awareness among people about crossing at crosswalks, which helps reduce traffic accidents.

Errors: 'spread awareness among people to cross in course works' uses wrong verbs and prepositions and 'course works' is incorrect. Use 'raise awareness among people about crossing at crosswalks' and change 'help them to reduce traffic accident' to 'helps reduce traffic accidents' for correct grammar and noun number. Suggestion: Use 'raise awareness about' and 'crossing at crosswalks'; match verb number with subject ('which helps').

× In my area, there are number of things that I would like to change, specially traffic, like when we are go anywhere, that moment we look that there are number of vehicle run on the road as a result of most of the time which is difficulty to go, uh, specific destination within our time.

✓ In my area, there are a number of things I would like to change, especially traffic. For example, when we go anywhere, we see a number of vehicles running on the road, so most of the time it is difficult to reach a specific destination on time.

Errors: 'there are number of' needs the article 'a' ('a number of'). 'specially' should be 'especially.' 'when we are go anywhere' is ungrammatical—use 'when we go anywhere.' 'number of vehicle run' needs plural 'vehicles running.' 'which is difficulty to go, specific destination within our time' is awkward; use 'it is difficult to reach a specific destination on time.' Suggestion: Use 'a number of' and correct verb forms and word order for clarity.

× So it is really important to avoid it.

✓ So it is really important to reduce it.

'Avoid it' is possible but unnatural in context; the intended meaning is to reduce traffic congestion. Use 'reduce it' or 'avoid it when possible.' Also ensure present simple 'it is' remains for general truth. Suggestion: Use precise verbs that match intended meaning, e.g., 'reduce traffic' or 'avoid congestion.'