Traffic— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and a specific reason. Use one or two supporting details with linking words and avoid repetition. Also finish your thought instead of trailing off.

Exemplo: Not really. There aren’t many crosswalks near where I live because the area is mainly a university campus, and most people walk or cycle, so traffic is calm. As a result, pedestrian crossings aren’t considered necessary.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion, give specific reasons and one example or suggestion for improvement, use linking words (because, so, therefore) and avoid fillers and repetition. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like there to be fewer cars on the roads because heavy traffic makes it crowded and delays buses. For example, introducing better public transport routes or a bike-sharing scheme could reduce car use and make moving around more convenient.

× No, not that much because I live the, I live the places nearby universities and the people are all follow the traffic rules.

✓ No, not that many because I live in places near universities and everyone follows the traffic rules.

Original errors: 'much' should be 'many' for countable 'crosswalks' (singular/plural issue). 'I live the, I live the places' is ungrammatical; use 'I live in places' (preposition error but corrected under plural phrasing). 'Nearby universities' is better as 'near universities'. 'the people are all follow' has subject-verb agreement and word order issues: use 'everyone follows' to match singular verb with a singular indefinite pronoun or 'people all follow'. Suggestion: use 'many' for countable nouns, include appropriate prepositions ('in', 'near'), and ensure subject-verb agreement ('everyone follows' or 'people follow').

× And most of us is most of us are students from university and I think we have the.

✓ Most of us are students at the university, and I think we have good adherence to the rules.

Original errors: 'most of us is' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'most of us' requires 'are' (plural). Repetition 'most of us most of us' should be removed (sentence structure error). 'Students from university' is acceptable but more natural as 'students at the university'. The trailing fragment 'and I think we have the.' is incomplete; completed to 'we have good adherence to the rules' to convey intended meaning. Suggestion: ensure plural subjects use plural verbs and avoid repeating phrases; complete sentence fragments with a clear object.

× To be honest, I have to say, I have to say that I want less cars and you know, just too many cars may be may cause traffic, uh, so crowded and not convenient in the.

✓ To be honest, I want fewer cars because too many cars can cause traffic, making the area crowded and inconvenient.

Original errors: 'I have to say' repetition is redundant (style). 'I want less cars' is incorrect: use 'fewer cars' for countable nouns (quantifier and modal/verb choice). 'may be may cause' is redundant and incorrect modal use; choose one modal like 'can' or 'may' followed by base verb 'cause'. 'so crowded and not convenient in the.' is ungrammatical and incomplete; rephrase to 'making the area crowded and inconvenient.' Suggestion: use 'fewer' with countable nouns, avoid redundant modals, and complete clauses for clarity.