Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid informal expressions like 'Oh my God' and correct pronunciation errors such as 'show' instead of 'shop'. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and add a supporting detail without redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping, but I usually shop only on special occasions rather than every day.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words like 'Aye' and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. Also, try to be more specific about why you compare prices and how it benefits you.

Exemplo: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because it helps me find the most affordable option and save money.

Sugestão: Work on sentence structure and grammar, such as using 'there are' instead of 'there is' for plural nouns. Avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your points with linking words. Also, correct 'show' to 'shop'.

Exemplo: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when shopping because I often get stuck between two options and can't decide which one to choose.

Sugestão: Avoid fragmented sentences and repetition. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. Also, use correct forms such as 'expensive' instead of 'expense'.

Exemplo: It really depends on the product; however, while some expensive products are great, I find that cheaper products can also be useful and just as good.

× Oh my God I love this questions.

✓ Oh my God I love this question.

The word 'questions' is plural but the demonstrative 'this' is singular. Use 'this question' for singular or 'these questions' for plural. Here, 'this question' fits better as the examiner asked one question.

× I love shopping but I don't show every day.

✓ I love shopping but I don't shop every day.

The verb 'show' is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'shop'. This is a vocabulary error affecting verb usage in present tense.

× I will shop occasionally on special occasions.

✓ I shop occasionally on special occasions.

The use of 'will' suggests future tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so simple present tense 'I shop' is appropriate.

× Of course I compare prices when I shop because. Aye. Definitely one to buy something at the best price and at the. At the most affordable price.

✓ Of course I compare prices when I shop because I definitely want to buy something at the best and most affordable price.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. It needs to be combined into a complete sentence with proper subject and verb for clarity.

× So I always compare price when I shop because it will help me arrange an.

✓ So I always compare prices when I shop because it will help me arrange them.

The noun 'price' should be plural 'prices' because multiple prices are compared. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; 'arrange them' clarifies the object.

× There is always two options that I stuck and I always didn't know.

✓ There are always two options that I get stuck with and I always don't know.

'There is' should be 'There are' to agree with plural 'two options'. Also, 'stuck' needs auxiliary verb 'get' and preposition 'with' for correct expression.

× I still remember when I was with my mom.

✓ I still remember when I was with my mom.

This sentence is correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× So it's very hard for me to make choices and I show.

✓ So it's very hard for me to make choices and I shop.

The word 'show' is incorrect; it should be 'shop' to match the context of shopping.

× Because some expensive products are very. Great to me.

✓ Because some expensive products are very great to me.

The sentence is fragmented; combining the parts into one sentence improves clarity.

× But at the same time I find that cheaper products also. I find that you I find cheaper products also useful and as good as expense.

✓ But at the same time, I find that cheaper products are also useful and as good as expensive ones.

The original sentence is repetitive and fragmented. It needs to be combined and corrected for clarity and grammar.