Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is quite long and a bit repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I love shopping. When I was in India, I used to go to plazas every weekend with my cousin because we enjoyed spending time together. However, now I mostly shop only for groceries.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical errors and is a bit unclear. Try to use correct tense and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I always compare prices before grocery shopping because I want to save money. I use an app called Flip, which helps me find the cheapest options available.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains irrelevant words like 'Spell up'. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your reasons. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases and focus on clarity.

Exemplo: No, I don't find it difficult to choose food or equipment nowadays. However, buying clothes is challenging because my mother used to select them for me in India, but now I have to choose on my own.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to express your opinion clearly with a topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid repetition or vague phrases.

Exemplo: I believe expensive products are usually better than cheaper ones because they are made from high-quality materials, which makes them more durable and reliable.

× I used to go around in some Plaza to shop every weekend with my cousin and I used to enjoy it and it would be fun when we were together.

✓ I used to go around some plazas to shop every weekend with my cousin and I used to enjoy it; it was fun when we were together.

The phrase 'some Plaza' is incorrect because 'Plaza' is singular and should be pluralized to 'plazas' to indicate multiple shopping places. Also, 'it would be fun' is better expressed as 'it was fun' to maintain past tense consistency.

× earlier I didn't knew this thing when I was new in Canada

✓ earlier I didn't know this thing when I was new in Canada

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'knew' should be corrected to 'know'. This is a common past tense error.

× I want to buy a groceries so that it it's much cheaper.

✓ I want to buy groceries so that it is much cheaper.

The article 'a' should not be used before 'groceries' because 'groceries' is a plural noun. Also, 'it it's' is a repetition error; it should be 'it is' or 'it's'.

× I don't find it challenging to shop things like for food or any equipment.

✓ I don't find it challenging to shop for things like food or any equipment.

The verb 'shop' is usually followed by the preposition 'for' when indicating the items being purchased. The phrase 'shop things like for food' is incorrect; it should be 'shop for things like food'.

× my mom used to choose for me

✓ my mom used to choose for me

This sentence is actually correct in preposition use. 'Choose for me' is acceptable when someone selects something on behalf of another. No correction needed.

× Well, I do believe that luxurious products which are expensive have a good quality in them rather than cheaper ones because indeed they.

✓ Well, I do believe that luxurious products which are expensive have good quality in them rather than cheaper ones because indeed they do.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'because indeed they.' It needs a verb to complete the thought. Adding 'do' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence structure.

× Most of them have been made from real quality, like good quality of good, so it's better.

✓ Most of them have been made with real quality, like good quality materials, so they're better.

The phrase 'made from real quality' is incorrect; 'made with real quality' is appropriate. Also, 'good quality of good' is unclear and should be 'good quality materials' for clarity. 'It's better' should be 'they're better' to refer to the products.