Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Améliorez la fluidité et la structure de votre réponse en évitant les répétitions et en utilisant des phrases complètes et cohérentes. Par exemple, commencez par une phrase claire exprimant votre opinion, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques avec des mots de liaison.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy shopping because it allows me to find products that suit my style. I like shopping both online and in physical stores, and I often go with my friends or family, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Travaillez sur la clarté et la cohérence de vos phrases en évitant les hésitations et en utilisant des mots de liaison pour relier vos idées. Soyez précis dans vos explications pour rendre votre réponse plus naturelle.

Exemplo: Yes, as a consumer, I always compare prices across different shops to find the best deal. I try to balance price and quality to ensure I get good value for my money.

Sugestão: Évitez les répétitions et les hésitations, et structurez votre réponse avec une phrase principale suivie d'explications claires. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour améliorer la fluidité.

Exemplo: Yes, it is often difficult for me to choose because there are many products I like. Moreover, as a student with a limited budget, I have to be careful about my spending.

Sugestão: Améliorez la cohérence et la grammaire de votre réponse en évitant les phrases incomplètes et en utilisant des mots de liaison pour exprimer clairement vos idées. Soyez précis dans vos opinions et exemples.

Exemplo: In my experience, expensive products are usually better than cheaper ones. When I was younger, I preferred cheap items because they were affordable, but now I prefer to buy durable products even if they cost more.

× I really like to shopping with my friends and family too.

✓ I really like shopping with my friends and family too.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form (verb + -ing) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Therefore, 'to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'shopping'. This is a common error in verb + -ing form usage.

× As a consumer. Of course I compare process. Uh, through different shops too?

✓ As a consumer, of course I compare prices through different shops too.

The sentence has incorrect preposition usage and a typo ('process' instead of 'prices'). 'Compare prices through different shops' is the correct phrase. Also, the sentence should be connected properly with commas instead of periods to maintain sentence flow.

× I always try to balance between prices and quality of a product.

✓ I always try to balance prices and quality of a product.

The verb 'balance' does not require the preposition 'between' when followed by two objects directly. Saying 'balance prices and quality' is correct. Using 'between' here is incorrect preposition usage.

× it's always a hard decision to me to compare between the the many different products that I like, I like, but.

✓ It's always a hard decision for me to compare the many different products that I like.

The phrase 'to me' should be 'for me' to indicate the person experiencing the difficulty. Also, 'compare between' is incorrect; 'compare' does not need 'between' when followed by objects. The sentence also had repeated words and unnecessary commas which were corrected for clarity.

× it's really difficult to me to make choices.

✓ It's really difficult for me to make choices.

The correct preposition to indicate the person experiencing difficulty is 'for', not 'to'. Hence, 'difficult for me' is correct.

× From my experience, I think it really does that The expensive products are always better than cheaper ones.

✓ From my experience, I think that expensive products are always better than cheaper ones.

The phrase 'I think it really does that' is ungrammatical and redundant. The correct structure is 'I think that...' followed by the statement. Also, 'The' before 'expensive products' is unnecessary here.

× Uh, when you were younger. I like the cheap things because as more affordable.

✓ Uh, when I was younger, I liked cheap things because they were more affordable.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. Talking about the past requires past tense verbs: 'was' instead of 'were' for 'I', 'liked' instead of 'like', and 'were' instead of 'as' (which is a typo) for 'more affordable'. Also, 'you' should be 'I' to maintain the speaker's perspective.

× But now I really like to shop something that is durable.

✓ But now I really like to shop for something that is durable.

The verb 'shop' when followed by an object requires the preposition 'for'. Therefore, 'shop something' is incorrect; it should be 'shop for something'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and pronouns combined.