Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp lại câu hỏi, và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, mạch lạc. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và tránh dài dòng không cần thiết.

Exemplo: No, I don't like shopping because it takes a lot of time. For example, I usually have to make a list and spend several hours buying essential items. Therefore, I often ask my mom to do the shopping since she is very efficient at it.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh những câu không rõ nghĩa hoặc lỗi phát âm.

Exemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because my mom told me it's important to evaluate the value of items before buying. For example, I look for discounts to save money when shopping.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng bị lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời dùng từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng và logic hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I find it difficult to make choices because there are many good options. Therefore, I often compare the quality and prices carefully, which makes me spend several hours shopping.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý kiến rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tốt hơn.

Exemplo: I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. For example, sometimes I buy cheaper items because of my budget. Although their durability might be lower, their features can still be good enough for my needs.

× Do you like shopping? I don't like shopping because I think that is is time. Assuming. For instance, before shopping I have to make a list, then I have to purchase essential items for several hours as a result and are usually asked my mom to shop as she is really professional at packing.

✓ I don't like shopping because I think it wastes time. For instance, before shopping, I have to make a list, then I have to spend several hours purchasing essential items. As a result, I usually ask my mom to shop because she is really professional at packing.

The original sentence has multiple sentence fragments and unclear expressions, such as 'that is is time. Assuming.' which do not form a complete or meaningful sentence. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be reorganized into clear, complete sentences to convey the intended meaning.

× and are usually asked my mom to shop as she is really professional at packing.

✓ and I usually ask my mom to shop because she is really professional at packing.

The phrase 'are usually asked my mom' is incorrect because the subject is missing and the pronoun usage is wrong. It should be 'I usually ask my mom' to correctly indicate who is performing the action.

× Yes, because my mom once said you have to evaluate items that you will put race and I think my mom right for example, he may need ring expanded tour is really crucial.

✓ Yes, because my mom once said you have to evaluate items that you will purchase, and I think my mom is right. For example, comparing prices is really crucial.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect pronouns and words such as 'put race' and 'he may need ring expanded tour' which do not make sense. The pronoun 'he' is incorrectly used and the sentence lacks clarity. It should be corrected to clear pronouns and proper vocabulary.

× So I always discount when I when I'm shopping.

✓ So I always look for discounts when I'm shopping.

The word 'discount' is incorrectly used as a verb here. The correct expression is 'look for discounts' or 'use discounts'.

× Yes, I'm not good at this season making because there are many good options.

✓ Yes, I'm not good at decision making because there are many good options.

The phrase 'this season making' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'decision making' to express the ability to make choices.

× Therefore, sometimes I have to compare the quality and then McCurdy season.

✓ Therefore, sometimes I have to compare the quality and then make a decision.

'McCurdy season' is a mishearing or misspelling of 'make a decision'. The pronoun and phrase are incorrect and need to be corrected to the proper expression.

× That's why I usually shop for several hours.

✓ That's why I usually spend several hours shopping.

The original sentence is understandable but can be improved for naturalness and clarity by using 'spend several hours shopping'.

× Maybe is durability is not good, but the features are not bad.

✓ Maybe its durability is not good, but the features are not bad.

The pronoun 'is' is incorrectly used instead of 'its' to indicate possession. The correct possessive pronoun is 'its'.