Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and natural but could be improved by adding a reason or example to make it more informative and engaging. Try to avoid very short answers by expanding slightly.

Exemplo: Definitely, I just love shopping because it allows me to discover new products and enjoy my free time.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and wordy. Try to be more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and focus on clear reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because managing my budget is important, so I try to find the best deals before buying anything.

Sugestão: Your answer has some hesitation and incomplete sentences. Try to speak more fluently and complete your thoughts clearly. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Not really, because I always make a shopping list beforehand, so I know exactly what to buy and it makes decision-making easier.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and clear but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more coherent and natural.

Exemplo: Not necessarily, because although expensive products often have good quality, you can also find affordable items that are just as reliable and well-made.

× Yes, I really do compare prices whenever I go for shopping because this is very important to check the rates of things because whenever you go for shopping, you just have to manage your budget and your management.

✓ Yes, I really do compare prices whenever I go shopping because it is very important to check the prices of things since whenever you go shopping, you have to manage your budget and your expenses.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, 'check the rates of things' is better expressed as 'check the prices of things'. Additionally, 'your management' is vague; 'your expenses' or 'your budget management' is clearer. Prepositions like 'for' are not used with 'go' in this context.

× Uh, not that difficult because, uh, I always make a list, whatever I'm going to shop actually, So it doesn't bother me at shop what to shop or not, what to.

✓ Uh, it's not that difficult because I always make a list of what I'm going to buy. So it doesn't bother me at the shop what to buy or not.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Whatever I'm going to shop' is incorrect; the verb 'shop' is not used with 'going to' in this way. Instead, 'what I'm going to buy' is correct. Also, 'at shop' should be 'at the shop'. The sentence needed restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So it doesn't bother me at shop what to shop or not, what to.

✓ So it doesn't bother me at the shop what to buy or not.

The phrase 'at shop' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'what to shop' is incorrect; the verb 'shop' is not used in this way. The correct verb is 'buy' in this context.

× No doubt expensive products are of good quality, but you can also find a good quality item in very low range.

✓ No doubt expensive products are of good quality, but you can also find good quality items at a very low price range.

The phrase 'in very low range' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'at' when referring to price ranges. Also, 'a good quality item' is better pluralised to 'good quality items' to match the general statement.