Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ, ví dụ như 'skin scare product' nên là 'skin care products'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ giống nhau. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially for skincare products and jewelry. I usually go to the shopping mall once a week when I have free time to buy things I like.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng, ví dụ như 'the salary, the price or increase' không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng nói rõ ràng và cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I always compare prices, especially after the COVID-19 pandemic because prices and salaries have changed. Therefore, I usually check prices online and choose the cheaper option.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên, ví dụ như 'have me give an advice' không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và dùng cấu trúc chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng.

Exemplo: I don't find it difficult to make choices because I usually buy only what I really like. If I have trouble deciding, I ask my mom for advice.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự mạch lạc, ví dụ như 'although it cheap' nên là 'although they are cheap' và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý kiến rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh nói lắp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: I think it depends. Sometimes cheaper products can have good quality, but expensive ones are often costly because of the brand name, not always because of better quality.

× Like many girls, I like shopping, especially skin care products or jewellery.

✓ Like many girls, I like shopping, especially skin care products or jewellery.

No correction needed here as 'skin care products' and 'jewellery' are correctly used in plural and singular forms respectively.

× Yeah, when I have free time, I usually spend once a week to go to the shopping mall to buy something that I like, like jewelry, skin scare product or some items.

✓ Yeah, when I have free time, I usually go to the shopping mall once a week to buy things that I like, like jewelry, skin care products, or some items.

The phrase 'I usually spend once a week to go' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I usually go to the shopping mall once a week'. Also, 'skin scare product' is a typo and should be 'skin care products' in plural form to match the context.

× like jewelry, skin scare product or some items.

✓ like jewelry, skin care products, or some items.

The phrase 'skin scare product' should be plural 'skin care products' to be consistent with the list and correct spelling.

× the salary, the price or increase.

✓ the salary, the price, or increases.

The phrase 'the salary, the price or increase' is incorrect because 'increase' should be plural 'increases' to match the list of items.

× we make the comparison about the the two prices and then we will buy the cheaper one.

✓ we compare the two prices and then we buy the cheaper one.

The phrase 'make the comparison about the the two prices' is awkward and redundant. The correct expression is 'compare the two prices'.

× I usually ask my mom to have me give an advice.

✓ I usually ask my mom to give me advice.

The phrase 'have me give an advice' is incorrect. The correct form is 'give me advice'. Also, 'advice' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'an'.

× cheaper ones, although it cheap, but it also have a good quality.

✓ cheaper ones, although they are cheap, also have good quality.

The pronoun 'it' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'ones'. Also, 'have' should be 'have' to agree with plural subject. 'a good quality' should be 'good quality' because 'quality' is uncountable here.

× although it cheap, but it also have a good quality.

✓ although they are cheap, they also have good quality.

Using both 'although' and 'but' together is redundant. Choose either 'although' or 'but'. Also, 'it cheap' should be 'they are cheap' for subject-verb agreement.

× the expensive products it just uh, expensive because they have a brand name, so people want to buy it because the brain just not.

✓ the expensive products are just expensive because they have a brand name, so people want to buy them because of the brand, not quality.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'it just uh, expensive' should be 'are just expensive' to agree with plural 'products'. 'people want to buy it' should be 'people want to buy them' to agree with plural. 'the brain just not' is unclear and likely a typo for 'the brand, not quality'.