Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some language inaccuracies and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. For example, "when I stop shop" should be "when I go shopping". Also, try to avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to improve coherence, such as "because" and "so". Try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively.

Exemplo: I don't really enjoy shopping because I find it quite exhausting when I go shopping. I often have to walk through many stores in large shopping malls, which can be tiring. Moreover, it takes a lot of time to find what I want, so I usually prefer shopping online instead.

Sugestão: Your answer is well-structured and relevant, with good use of linking words like "because" and "so". However, some vocabulary could be more precise, for example, "cost" could be "operating costs" or "overheads". Also, try to avoid minor grammatical errors and aim for more natural phrasing, such as "I can save money" instead of "save some money". Adding a bit more detail or a personal example would enhance your answer further.

Exemplo: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because different stores have varying prices due to factors like rent, operating costs, and customer traffic. For instance, some shops offer discounts to attract more customers. Therefore, by comparing prices, I can save money and find the best deal.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors, such as "variety of different type of things" which should be "a variety of different types of things". The answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to organise your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words like "for example" or "such as". Also, be specific and avoid vague phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, it can be difficult to make choices when I shop because there are many options available. For example, I like chocolate, and I often have to choose between milk chocolate and dark chocolate, each of which comes in many varieties.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains several language errors and unclear phrases, such as "Not not necessary" and "reduce the price of products to your cheque customer". These affect the naturalness and clarity of your response. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and correct grammar. Also, provide more specific examples and use linking words like "however" or "for instance" to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Not necessarily, because expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones. Sometimes, cheaper products can be of good quality, especially during discounts or promotions. For instance, a store might offer special prices to loyal customers, making products more affordable without reducing quality.

× I don't really enjoy shopping because I find it quite exhausting when I stop shop.

✓ I don't really enjoy shopping because I find it quite exhausting when I stop shopping.

The verb 'stop' should be followed by the gerund form 'shopping' to indicate the action of ceasing to do something. Using the base form 'shop' after 'stop' is incorrect in this context.

× I can see variety of different type of things I want to buy like food.

✓ I can see a variety of different types of things I want to buy like food.

The word 'variety' is a singular noun and should be preceded by the article 'a'. Also, 'type' should be plural 'types' to agree with 'different'. This corrects the singular/plural agreement and article usage.

× I like chocolate so I would prefer buying some milk chocolate or some other dark chocolate and these two type of chocolate have many different kinds.

✓ I like chocolate so I would prefer buying some milk chocolate or some other dark chocolate and these two types of chocolate have many different kinds.

The phrase 'two type' is incorrect because 'type' should be plural 'types' when referring to more than one. This corrects the singular/plural agreement.

× Not not necessary, because expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones.

✓ Not necessarily, because expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones.

The phrase 'Not not necessary' is incorrect. The correct adverb form 'necessarily' should be used to modify the negation 'Not'. This corrects the misuse of words and pronouns.

× For example, a store might reduce the price of products to your cheque customer, making it more affordable without composing costs.

✓ For example, a store might reduce the price of products for loyal customers, making it more affordable without compromising costs.

The phrase 'to your cheque customer' is incorrect and unclear. It seems the intended meaning is 'loyal customers'. Also, 'composing costs' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'compromising costs'. This corrects the misuse of pronouns and vocabulary.