Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. For example, say "Yes, I like shopping because it makes me happy. Buying new clothes feels like a fresh start."

Exemplo: Yes, I like shopping because it makes me happy. Buying new clothes feels like a fresh start and gives me a sense of excitement.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Use linking words and clear reasons to explain why you compare prices. For example, "Yes, I compare prices because some clothes may have quality issues, so I want to find the best value."

Exemplo: Yes, I compare prices because some clothes may have quality problems, so I want to make sure I get good value for my money.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using linking words and clearer structure. For example, "Yes, it is difficult sometimes. For instance, when I buy ice cream, I get confused between strawberry and watermelon flavors."

Exemplo: Yes, it is difficult sometimes. For example, when I buy ice cream, I get confused about whether to choose strawberry or watermelon flavor.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks a clear opinion. Try to state your opinion directly and support it with a specific example. For example, "I don't think expensive products are always better. For instance, I recently bought a cheaper product online that was just as good as an expensive one."

Exemplo: I don't think expensive products are always better. For example, I bought a cheaper product online recently, and it was just as good as a more expensive one.

× Yes, I like I like shopping because it's make me like give me the happiness that I I want and buying thing.

✓ Yes, I like shopping because it makes me happy and gives me the happiness that I want when buying things.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'give' should be 'gives' for the same reason. The phrase 'buying thing' is incorrect; it should be 'buying things' to indicate plural objects. Repetition of 'I like' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× It makes me more happy because it's like a new beginning, a new clothes, new material.

✓ It makes me happier because it's like a new beginning, new clothes, new material.

The adjective 'happy' should be in comparative form 'happier' to express increased happiness. 'A new clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural and does not take 'a'. The article 'a' is removed before 'new clothes'.

× Yes I do because some clothes have some some like problem and I should take care of quality maybe maybe the church to share but they are not simply.

✓ Yes, I do because some clothes have some problems and I should take care of the quality, maybe check the share, but they are not simple.

The phrase 'some some like problem' is unclear and likely meant to be 'some problems'. 'Church to share' seems to be a mishearing or typo; possibly 'check the share' or 'check the quality'. The sentence is unclear but corrected to the best understanding. Added commas for clarity.

× Yes, it is actually. I sometime when I buy for example ice cream, I be confused what I should buy, strawberry or watermelon.

✓ Yes, it is actually. Sometimes when I buy, for example, ice cream, I get confused about what I should buy, strawberry or watermelon.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'I be confused' is incorrect; it should be 'I get confused' to express the present tense state. Added commas for clarity and corrected sentence structure.

× So yeah, it's difficult sometime the outfit.

✓ So yeah, sometimes it's difficult to choose the outfit.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The sentence structure is incomplete; added 'to choose' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Impression. I think she was saying that maybe better than the expensive.

✓ In my impression, I think cheaper products may be better than expensive ones.

The sentence 'Impression.' is incomplete and unclear. Rephrased to 'In my impression' to express opinion. 'Maybe better than the expensive' is incomplete; added 'cheaper products' and 'ones' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For example, I saw a cheaper products in Xi'an in an online website and it's same that I buy it is before 2 days and it's the same.

✓ For example, I saw cheaper products in Xi'an on an online website, and they are the same as the ones I bought two days ago.

'A cheaper products' is incorrect because 'products' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'In an online website' should be 'on an online website' (preposition correction). 'It's same that I buy it is before 2 days' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'they are the same as the ones I bought two days ago' to express past action and comparison properly.