Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially when I feel gloomy, because it helps improve my mood. For example, I often go window shopping with my family and friends, which creates a lively atmosphere and allows us to have fun together.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Focus on giving a direct response with clear reasons. Avoid unfinished sentences and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because I want to ensure I get good value for my money. Additionally, I believe it's important to be a smart shopper and avoid overspending.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I find it difficult to make choices when shopping. Therefore, I often go with my siblings, friends, or spouse because they know my preferences and give me helpful advice.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your points more clearly and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. For example, well-known brands tend to charge higher prices, and shops located in tourist areas often increase prices due to demand, which doesn't always reflect better quality.

× I sometimes go window shopping is improves my mood and recharges my batteries.

✓ I sometimes go window shopping because it improves my mood and recharges my batteries.

The original sentence lacks a conjunction to connect the two clauses properly, causing a sentence structure error. Adding 'because' clarifies the relationship between the actions and corrects the sentence structure.

× It produces energetic atmosphere especially when I hang out with my loved ones, siblings, friends and go shopping.

✓ It produces an energetic atmosphere especially when I hang out with my loved ones, siblings, friends and go shopping.

The phrase 'energetic atmosphere' requires the indefinite article 'an' before it. Omitting the article is a common error with uncountable or singular nouns starting with a vowel sound.

× Yes, I compare the price says when I want to shopping because I want to make sure that I get good value for the it's good value for the money.

✓ Yes, I compare the prices when I want to shop because I want to make sure that I get good value for the money.

The original sentence contains incorrect word forms and redundant phrases. 'Price says' is incorrect; it should be 'prices'. 'Want to shopping' should be 'want to shop'. Also, 'for the it's good value for the money' is redundant and ungrammatical; it should be 'for the money'.

× And there's a stereotype about women enjoying enjoy comparing prices and I'm not an exception.

✓ And there's a stereotype about women enjoying comparing prices and I'm not an exception.

The phrase 'enjoying enjoy' is redundant and incorrect. Only one verb form is needed here, so 'enjoy' should be removed to correct the sentence.

× So it's really important to.

✓ So it's really important to do so.

The sentence ends abruptly without completing the thought, causing a sentence structure error. Adding 'do so' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× I sometimes hang out with my siblings, my friends and my spouse because they always give me good, give me good advice and always use their advice because they know about my favorite and interest, they can help me.

✓ I sometimes hang out with my siblings, my friends and my spouse because they always give me good advice and I always use their advice because they know about my favourites and interests, so they can help me.

The original sentence has repetition ('give me good, give me good advice'), incorrect pronoun use ('always use their advice' should be 'I always use their advice'), and singular/plural mismatches ('favorite and interest' should be 'favourites and interests'). Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs proper conjunctions.

× For instance, the long brands always their products are really pricey.

✓ For instance, the long brands always have their products really pricey.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Long brands' is unclear but assuming it means 'luxury brands', the verb 'have' is needed to connect the subject and predicate. Also, 'always their products are' is incorrect word order.

× The other thing, the location of these products and shops is really important.

✓ Another thing is that the location of these products and shops is really important.

The original sentence lacks a proper verb to connect the subject and predicate, causing a sentence structure error. Adding 'is that' clarifies the sentence.

× For instance, when they're located in tourism as attractions, they prefer to raise their price and some.

✓ For instance, when they're located in tourist attractions, they prefer to raise their prices and so on.

The phrase 'located in tourism as attractions' is incorrect; it should be 'located in tourist attractions'. Also, 'raise their price and some' is incomplete and unclear; 'raise their prices and so on' is more appropriate.