Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and articles, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by limiting it to 3-4 sentences. For example, instead of saying 'I only prefer shopping whenever I need it something new', say 'I usually shop only when I need something new.'

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping, but I am not a big fan of it. I usually shop only when I need something new. For instance, I recently bought a new pair of shoes because my old ones were torn on one side. I believe it's important to shop occasionally to replace worn-out items.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Please focus on forming complete and coherent sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid incomplete thoughts like 'and to say?'. Try to explain clearly why comparing prices is important with specific reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I always compare prices when I shop because many products have similar prices but different quality. Comparing prices helps me find the best value for money and avoid paying more for low-quality items. This way, I can save money and shop wisely.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and repetition. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, use 'because' to explain reasons and 'so' to show results.

Exemplo: Yes, I find it difficult to make choices when I shop because I often get confused about which item is the best. Therefore, I usually ask my parents for help to select clothes that are comfortable and attractive.

Sugestão: Your answer has some hesitation and informal fillers like 'uh'. Try to speak confidently and avoid fillers. Also, improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to make your points clearer. Avoid repeating the same idea unnecessarily.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe expensive products are generally better than cheaper ones because they usually have higher quality. However, cheaper products may not last long and can break easily. Therefore, I prefer to invest in expensive items for durability.

× I only prefer shopping whenever I need it something new such as the last time I purchased a new shoes because my old shoes was tear from the one side.

✓ I only prefer shopping whenever I need something new such as the last time I purchased new shoes because my old shoes were torn on one side.

The word 'shoes' is plural, so 'a new shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'new shoes' without 'a'. Also, 'my old shoes was tear' has two errors: 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' not 'was', and 'tear' should be the past participle 'torn'. The phrase 'from the one side' is better expressed as 'on one side'. These corrections ensure subject-verb agreement and correct adjective and verb forms.

× It is important for compare prices.

✓ It is important to compare prices.

The phrase 'important for compare' is incorrect because 'for' should be followed by a noun or gerund. Here, the verb 'compare' should be in the infinitive form 'to compare' after 'important'. This correction fixes the incorrect preposition usage and verb form.

× there are lot of items that is equal in prices.

✓ there are lots of items that are equal in price.

'lot' should be pluralized to 'lots' when used with 'are'. Also, 'items that is' is incorrect because 'items' is plural and requires 'are'. 'Prices' should be singular 'price' when referring to equality of cost. These corrections address subject-verb agreement and singular/plural noun usage.

× I think the best way to prevent ourself from the.

✓ I think the best way to prevent ourselves from that.

The reflexive pronoun 'ourself' is incorrect; the correct form for plural is 'ourselves'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'from the', which should be completed as 'from that' or 'from it' to make sense. This correction fixes the reflexive pronoun and sentence completeness.

× because sometime I still confuse to choose best among one of them.

✓ because sometimes I still get confused to choose the best among them.

'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'confuse' should be 'get confused' to correctly express the state. 'best' should be preceded by 'the' as it is a superlative adjective. 'among one of them' is incorrect; 'among them' suffices. These corrections improve adverb usage, verb form, article use, and phrase structure.

× Then I take help from my parents to to select the best and comfortable and attractive piece of clothes.

✓ Then I take help from my parents to select the best, most comfortable, and most attractive piece of clothing.

The phrase 'to to' is a typographical error and should be 'to'. When listing multiple adjectives before a noun, use commas and repeat 'most' for clarity. 'piece of clothes' is incorrect; 'clothes' is plural, so 'piece of clothing' is correct. These corrections fix conjunction errors, adjective order, and noun usage.

× they not uh, use for long time or they get tired and broke quickly.

✓ they are not, uh, used for a long time or they get tired and break quickly.

'they not uh, use' is incorrect; it should be 'they are not used' to form the passive voice correctly. 'for long time' needs an article 'a' to become 'for a long time'. 'broke' is past tense; here, present tense 'break' is needed to match 'get tired'. These corrections address verb tense, passive voice, and article usage.