Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding informal phrases like 'wanna' and redundant expressions. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it helps me find products that improve my daily life. For example, buying a good quality blender has made cooking much easier and more enjoyable for me.

Sugestão: Focus on using correct grammar and more formal vocabulary. Avoid informal phrases like 'wanna' and improve sentence structure. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reasoning with linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: I usually compare prices when I shop to save money. However, if a product is rare or I really want it, I might buy it without comparing prices because it's hard to find elsewhere.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and using linking words to connect ideas. Provide more specific details or examples to support your points, and avoid vague phrases like 'different properties'.

Exemplo: Sometimes, it is difficult to choose between brands, especially for technology products because they have various features. However, I usually focus on buying what I need, which helps me avoid confusion.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer by using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid absolute statements and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Generally, expensive products tend to be better than cheaper ones because of higher quality. However, sometimes the price is influenced by the brand's popularity rather than the product's actual value.

× Yes, I really like shopping and I wanna make my life easier with buying some products or increasing my life quality with them.

✓ Yes, I really like shopping and I wanna make my life easier by buying some products or increasing my life quality with them.

The phrase 'with buying' is incorrect; the correct preposition to express purpose here is 'by' followed by the gerund form 'buying'. This is a common structure to indicate the means or method of doing something.

× If I'm very excited from that product and if that product hard to find, I'm not that much picky about compare prices.

✓ If I'm very excited about that product and if that product is hard to find, I'm not that picky about comparing prices.

The correct preposition after 'excited' is 'about', not 'from'. Also, 'hard to find' requires the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct. Additionally, 'picky about compare prices' should be 'picky about comparing prices' because 'about' is followed by a gerund.

× If I'm very excited from that product and if that product hard to find, I'm not that much picky about compare prices.

✓ If I'm very excited about that product and if that product is hard to find, I'm not that picky about comparing prices.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' in 'that product hard to find'. In English, a subject and verb are required for a complete sentence; here, 'that product is hard to find' is correct.

× If I'm very excited from that product and if that product hard to find, I'm not that much picky about compare prices.

✓ If I'm very excited about that product and if that product is hard to find, I'm not that picky about comparing prices.

After the preposition 'about', the verb should be in the gerund form 'comparing' rather than the base form 'compare'.

× But except this, yeah, I'm comparing prices.

✓ But except for this, yeah, I'm comparing prices.

The phrase 'except this' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'except for' when excluding something.

× I'm not that much picky about compare prices.

✓ I'm not that picky about comparing prices.

The phrase 'that much picky' is incorrect; 'picky' is an adjective and should be modified by 'that' without 'much'. Also, 'compare' should be 'comparing' after 'about'.

× Sometimes, yes, it's hard to make decision between brands, especially in technology products because they have different properties.

✓ Sometimes, yes, it's hard to make decisions between brands, especially in technology products because they have different properties.

The noun 'decision' should be plural 'decisions' because the context implies multiple choices between brands.

× But generally I'm just buying what I need so I don't need to be confusing about the product.

✓ But generally I'm just buying what I need so I don't need to be confused about the product.

The adjective 'confusing' describes something that causes confusion, but here the speaker is describing their own state, so the correct adjective is 'confused'.

× Generally yes, expensive ones absolutely better than cheaper ones but there is some exceptions because some products is expensive because of their brands and popularity of brands absolutely affecting the product price.

✓ Generally yes, expensive ones are absolutely better than cheaper ones but there are some exceptions because some products are expensive because of their brands and the popularity of brands absolutely affects the product price.

The sentence has several singular/plural errors: 'expensive ones absolutely better' needs the verb 'are'; 'there is some exceptions' should be 'there are some exceptions'; 'some products is expensive' should be 'some products are expensive'; 'popularity of brands absolutely affecting' should be 'popularity of brands absolutely affects' to agree with singular subject.