Shopping— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'We can be quite frustrating' which seems incorrect. Also, 'The phone shopping' is confusing. Try to make your sentences clearer and more coherent, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Keep your answer within 5 sentences and focus on natural English usage.

Exemplo: I don't enjoy shopping very much because it takes a lot of time to decide what to buy. For instance, I often find it hard to choose between different options, which can be frustrating. Therefore, I prefer shopping online as it saves time and is more convenient.

Sugestão: Your answer has several repetitions and grammatical mistakes, such as 'watch watch the price start' and 'I I find check the price tag'. Try to avoid repeating words and focus on clear sentence structure. Also, provide a more natural and complete response with linking words to explain your opinion.

Exemplo: No, I usually don't compare prices because I have enough money and price is not a major concern for me. However, I understand that many people prefer to compare prices to get the best deal.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and fragmented, with incomplete sentences and questions that do not fit the context, such as 'The skin and how? How it fresh?'. Try to form complete sentences and explain your reasons clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific details relevant to shopping choices.

Exemplo: Yes, it is difficult for me to make choices when shopping because I pay close attention to details like the colour, quality, and freshness of the product. For example, when buying fruit, I check if it looks fresh and ripe before deciding.

Sugestão: Your answer has hesitations and unclear phrasing, such as 'it is a factor is can be, uh, push, push, uh, price higher than normal.' Try to avoid filler words and speak more confidently. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Exemplo: I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because sometimes the high price is due to the brand name rather than quality. For instance, some popular brands charge more simply because of their reputation.

× We can be quite frustrating.

✓ It can be quite frustrating.

The original sentence uses 'We' which incorrectly refers to the speaker and others, but the intended meaning is that the situation or process is frustrating. Therefore, 'It' is the correct subject. This is a sentence structure error because the subject does not agree with the intended meaning.

× The phone shopping is not one of my favorite hobbies.

✓ Phone shopping is not one of my favorite hobbies.

The definite article 'The' is incorrectly used before 'phone shopping'. When referring to activities or hobbies in general, articles are usually omitted. This is an article error.

× Absolutely not because I have a lot of money so I don't really need to watch watch the price start and I I find check the price tag is not important to me.

✓ Absolutely not, because I have a lot of money, so I don't really need to watch the price, and I find checking the price tag is not important to me.

The original sentence has repeated words ('watch watch'), missing commas, and awkward conjunction usage. Adding commas improves clarity, removing repeated words corrects redundancy, and changing 'check' to 'checking' fits the verb form after 'find'. This is an incorrect conjunction and verb form usage error.

× Yes it is because when I try to buy something I watch out carefully about the color the.

✓ Yes, it is because when I try to buy something, I watch carefully for the colour.

The phrase 'watch out carefully about the color' is incorrect. The correct preposition after 'watch' in this context is 'for'. Also, 'watch out' usually means to be careful or alert, but here 'watch' alone is appropriate. Commas are added for clarity. This is an incorrect preposition usage error.

× The skin and how? How it fresh? Anything I can check?

✓ I also check the texture and freshness. Is it fresh? Is there anything else I can check?

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'The skin and how?' and 'How it fresh?' are incomplete and ungrammatical. Rewriting them into complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness. This is a sentence structure error.

× I don't really think that because expensive products, which may be from the popular brand, it is a factor is can be, uh, push, push, uh, price higher than normal.

✓ I don't really think that because expensive products, which may be from popular brands, can push the price higher than normal.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains repeated words and unclear phrasing. Removing unnecessary words and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning. This is a sentence structure error.