Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は内容が豊富ですが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「existence expansion」は不適切な表現で、「business expansion」など具体的な言葉を使うと良いでしょう。また、最後の文は意味が不明瞭なので、明確で簡潔な表現に改善してください。

Ví dụ: I work in the global strategy team at a financial company. I am responsible for the European and American regions, supporting local offices with business expansion and strategic planning. Although the work is challenging, it is very rewarding.

Gợi ý: 回答に多くのためらいや繰り返しがあり、流暢さが欠けています。話す際は、ためらいを減らし、簡潔で明確な文を心がけましょう。また、場所の説明は一文でまとめ、具体的な情報を含めると良いです。

Ví dụ: My office is near Tokyo Station, which is very convenient. It takes me about 15 minutes by train to get there from my home.

Gợi ý: 回答は内容が重複しており、最後の文は意味が不明瞭です。より自然で効果的な回答にするために、冗長な部分を省き、明確な理由や感想を述べるようにしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it's a good place to work because the office is close to many shops and restaurants. Also, my commute is short, which makes my daily routine comfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で、文法的にも誤りがあります。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。また、繰り返しやためらいを減らし、簡潔に話す練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: I have worked there for almost three years. Although the location is convenient with many shops nearby, I don't like the noise around the office.

Gợi ý: 回答が途中で途切れており、意味が伝わりにくいです。将来の計画については、明確で完結な文を使い、理由も具体的に述べるようにしましょう。ためらいを減らし、流暢に話す練習が必要です。

Ví dụ: In the near future, I would like to work abroad because I enjoy using English with my colleagues in other offices.

× I'm in charge of the European and American regions, supporting the local offices with existence expansion and strategic planning.

✓ I'm in charge of the European and American regions, supporting the local offices with business expansion and strategic planning.

The phrase 'existence expansion' is incorrect; the correct term is 'business expansion' to express growth or development of operations. This is a vocabulary choice error related to preposition and noun usage.

× It's all regarding but challenging but rewarding worlds.

✓ It's all regarding challenging but rewarding work.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Worlds' is incorrect here; 'work' fits the context. Also, 'regarding' is misused. The corrected sentence uses proper structure and vocabulary to convey the intended meaning.

× I work at, I work at the Tokyo and uh, near, uh, it's, uh, my office is near the Tokyo station.

✓ I work in Tokyo, near Tokyo Station; my office is close to Tokyo Station.

The phrase 'I work at, I work at the Tokyo' is awkward and incorrect. The preposition 'in' is appropriate for cities. Also, repetition and filler words should be removed for clarity.

× It takes, uh, 15 minutes by train to, from my home, uh.

✓ It takes about 15 minutes by train from my home.

The phrase 'to, from my home' is contradictory and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'from' to indicate the starting point of the journey.

× my community is quite short and comfortable.

✓ my commute is quite short and comfortable.

The word 'community' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'commute', which refers to the journey to work. This is a vocabulary error involving incorrect pronoun substitution.

× So, so that's far. It's far the good.

✓ So, it's far, but it's good.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence uses proper conjunction and word order to express the intended meaning.

× Most three years, uh, because my, my office is near the Tokyo station and, uh, it is very convenient, uh, because, uh, uh, because there are many shops and restaurants nearby where the, it's a little noisy that, uh, uh, which I don't like.

✓ For almost three years, my office has been near Tokyo Station, and it is very convenient because there are many shops and restaurants nearby. However, it is a little noisy, which I don't like.

The original sentence has multiple issues including incorrect pronoun use, missing prepositions, and unclear phrasing. The correction clarifies the time frame, improves pronoun references, and corrects sentence structure.

× I, I'd like to work at the, uh, works abroad in the near future because I like, uh, I like, use English with my colleagues in other, other holy offices.

✓ I'd like to work abroad in the near future because I like using English with my colleagues in other global offices.

The phrase 'work at the, uh, works abroad' is incorrect. The modal verb 'would like' is correctly used, but the following phrase is ungrammatical. Also, 'holy offices' is likely a mispronunciation of 'global offices'. The correction uses proper modal verb structure and vocabulary.