Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding hesitations and repetitions. Also, correct the grammar and word order, for example, say 'I am currently neither working nor studying because I am on maternity leave.' Keep your answer concise and clear.

Ví dụ: I am currently neither working nor studying because I am on maternity leave. However, a few months ago, I worked at an Amazon warehouse as a picker and packer.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to make your sentences more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain your role with specific details.

Ví dụ: As I mentioned, I worked at an Amazon warehouse a few months ago. My role involved picking and packing, which means sorting packages according to their destinations and preparing them for drivers to deliver.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'also' or 'in addition' to connect ideas. Capitalise proper nouns correctly and be specific about your skills.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. The workplace helped me improve important skills such as time management and collaboration. In addition, I had the chance to work in a multicultural environment with people from various backgrounds.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and make your answer more fluent. Use linking words to organise your points clearly. Also, try to use more natural expressions, for example, 'The workspace is spacious and well-ventilated, with good natural light and temperature control.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I would definitely like the place. Firstly, the workspace is spacious. Moreover, it has good ventilation, plenty of natural light, and effective temperature control for both heating and cooling.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, say 'In the future, I would love to work as a teacher because it is my dream job. I am passionate about helping others and supporting their growth.'

Ví dụ: In the future, I would love to work as a teacher because it is my dream job. I am passionate about helping others and supporting their personal growth.

× Will currently I neither work nor uh nor study because I'm on maternity leave, but a few months ago I was working as Amazon warehouse as a picking picker and Packer.

✓ Currently, I neither work nor study because I'm on maternity leave, but a few months ago I was working at Amazon warehouse as a picker and packer.

The use of 'Will' at the beginning is incorrect for expressing current status; 'will' is a modal verb used for future intentions or predictions. The correct way to express the current situation is to start with 'Currently'. Also, 'picking picker' is redundant; 'picker' suffices. Additionally, 'as Amazon warehouse' should be 'at Amazon warehouse' because 'at' is the correct preposition for workplaces.

× As I mentioned, I was working at Amazon Warehouse a few months ago. My role was, uh, of picking and packing, which involves sorting out the packages according to the location and packing them for drivers to take away.

✓ As I mentioned, I was working at Amazon Warehouse a few months ago. My role was picking and packing, which involves sorting out the packages according to their location and packing them for drivers to take away.

The phrase 'My role was, uh, of picking and packing' incorrectly uses the preposition 'of' after 'was'. The correct structure is 'My role was picking and packing' without 'of'. Also, adding 'their' before 'location' clarifies possession.

× Yes definitely because this place helped me to Polish my skills like time management and collaboration.

✓ Yes, definitely, because this place helped me to polish my skills like time management and collaboration.

'Polish' should be in lowercase as it is a verb here, not a proper noun. Also, commas after 'Yes' and 'definitely' improve clarity and natural flow.

× Apart from this, I'm also I was also getting chance to work in a multicultural environment because people from different locations work there.

✓ Apart from this, I was also getting a chance to work in a multicultural environment because people from different locations work there.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I'm also' with past tense 'I was also getting'. Since the context is past experience, 'I was also getting' is correct. Also, 'getting chance' should be 'getting a chance' to be grammatically correct.

× Uh, there are few reasons behind this as, uh, the area is quite broad in its dimensions.

✓ Uh, there are a few reasons behind this as, uh, the area is quite broad in its dimensions.

'Few' without 'a' implies almost none, which is likely not intended here. 'A few' means some, which fits the context better.

× Along with that, proper ventilation, natural light and uh, umm, cooling and heating temperature management are there.

✓ Along with that, proper ventilation, natural light, and cooling and heating temperature management are available.

The sentence lacks the Oxford comma before 'and', which improves clarity. Also, 'are there' is informal; 'are available' is more appropriate in this context.

× In future, I would love to work as a teacher because it's not only my dream job but also I have I'm passionate about teaching others and helping others and growing.

✓ In the future, I would love to work as a teacher because it's not only my dream job but also because I am passionate about teaching others, helping others, and growing.

The phrase 'In future' should be 'In the future' for correct usage. The sentence is missing 'because' before 'I am passionate' to connect the clauses properly. Also, 'I have I'm passionate' is incorrect; it should be 'I am passionate'. Commas are added for clarity in the list.