Work— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I'm currently working as a primary school teacher.
Giám khảo
Where do you work?>
Thí sinh
I work as an International School called Scott AGS which is located in Danfu district here in Ho Chi Minh City.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to work?
Thí sinh
Yeah, absolutely. The environment is professional and supportive and I really appreciate the modern facilities and the focus on student centered learning.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you work?
Thí sinh
Definitely, I enjoy working with both my students and colleagues. It's a very positive and dynamic atmosphere which makes going to work every day a pleasure.
Giám khảo
What are your future work plans?
Thí sinh
In the near future, I'm learning to pursue a masters degree in TESOL, either in Australia or New Zealand. I believe it will help me improve my teaching skills and open up more opportunities internationally.
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Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn đã rõ ràng và tự nhiên, nhưng bạn có thể thêm một câu ngắn để làm phong phú câu trả lời, ví dụ như nói thêm về lĩnh vực bạn dạy hoặc cảm nhận về công việc.
Ví dụ: I'm currently working as a primary school teacher, specializing in English. I really enjoy helping young children develop their language skills.
Where do you work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, bạn nên nói "I work at an international school called Scott AGS..." thay vì "I work as an International School..." Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: I work at an international school called Scott AGS, which is located in Danfu district here in Ho Chi Minh City. It's a great place with a diverse community.
Is it a good place to work?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn rất tốt, tự nhiên và có nội dung cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể thêm một câu nối để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, absolutely. The environment is professional and supportive, and I really appreciate the modern facilities as well as the focus on student-centered learning, which makes teaching more effective.
Would you like the place where you work?
Điểm: 95.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn rất tự nhiên, rõ ràng và có nội dung phong phú. Bạn có thể giữ nguyên hoặc thêm một ví dụ cụ thể để tăng tính thuyết phục.
Ví dụ: Definitely, I enjoy working with both my students and colleagues. For example, we often collaborate on projects, which creates a very positive and dynamic atmosphere that makes going to work every day a pleasure.
What are your future work plans?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên dùng thì tương lai chính xác hơn, ví dụ "I plan to pursue" thay vì "I'm learning to pursue". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: In the near future, I plan to pursue a master's degree in TESOL, either in Australia or New Zealand, because I believe it will help me improve my teaching skills and open up more international opportunities.
Ngữ pháp
× I work as an International School called Scott AGS which is located in Danfu district here in Ho Chi Minh City.
✓ I work at an international school called Scott AGS which is located in Danfu district here in Ho Chi Minh City.
The phrase 'work as an International School' is incorrect because 'work as' is used to describe a job role or position, not a place. The correct preposition is 'work at' when referring to a place of employment. Also, 'International School' should not be capitalized unless it is part of the official name. Therefore, the sentence should be corrected to 'I work at an international school called Scott AGS...'. This correction fixes the 'There be issue' related to the incorrect use of 'as' and preposition.
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