Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata kerja agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta hindari kesalahan grammar seperti 'it's make' menjadi 'it makes'.

Ví dụ: I work as a human resources manager, and I really enjoy this job because it allows me to interact with people and help solve their problems. Previously, I switched my career from accounting to HR, and I have found it very rewarding.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki penggunaan kata dan struktur kalimat agar lebih natural, misalnya 'woman's college' menjadi 'women's college'. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Ví dụ: I work at an educational institution in Bogor, which is a women's college. It is unique because 60% of the staff are female, and we aim to create a supportive and comfortable environment for the students.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kosakata, serta hindari pengulangan dan kata-kata tidak jelas seperti 'uh'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelas untuk menjelaskan pendapat Anda.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is a good place to work because we follow Islamic values, which make us feel like a family. However, sometimes conflicts arise since most of the staff are female, and decisions can be influenced by emotions.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kosakata, serta gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan alami. Misalnya, 'bogus city' harusnya 'busy city', dan 'hurt' harus diganti dengan 'hear'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like the place where I work because it is surrounded by nature with many trees. It is far from the busy city, so it makes me feel relaxed and calm since we don't hear much traffic noise or pollution.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan tata bahasa agar lebih jelas dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan hindari pengulangan.

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't have specific plans for my future career yet. For now, I want to do my best as an HR manager by learning more about HR and being productive.

× I work as a human resources managers and I really love this job because it's make me interact with others people and help them to solve problems.

✓ I work as a human resources manager and I really love this job because it makes me interact with other people and help them to solve problems.

The word 'managers' should be singular 'manager' because the subject 'I' refers to one person. 'It's make' should be 'it makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Others people' should be 'other people' because 'other' is the correct adjective here, not 'others'. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena penggunaan bentuk jamak pada kata 'managers' yang seharusnya tunggal sesuai subjek 'I'. Kata kerja 'make' harus disesuaikan menjadi 'makes' untuk subjek tunggal 'it'. 'Others people' salah karena 'other' adalah kata sifat yang benar digunakan sebelum kata benda jamak 'people'.

× Before this I switched my career from accounting staff to HR and I really enjoy with this career.

✓ Before this, I switched my career from accounting staff to HR and I really enjoy this career.

The phrase 'enjoy with' is incorrect; 'enjoy' is a transitive verb and does not require 'with'. Also, a comma after 'Before this' improves clarity. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan preposisi 'with' yang tidak diperlukan setelah kata kerja 'enjoy'. Selain itu, penambahan koma setelah 'Before this' membantu memperjelas kalimat.

× I work at an educational institution in Bogor, which is a woman's college and it's very unique because 60% of employers are female.

✓ I work at an educational institution in Bogor, which is a women's college and it's very unique because 60% of employees are female.

'Woman's college' should be 'women's college' because it refers to a college for multiple women. 'Employers' should be 'employees' as it refers to the people working there, not those who employ. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan bentuk tunggal 'woman's' yang seharusnya jamak 'women's' untuk menunjukkan kepemilikan oleh banyak wanita. 'Employers' salah karena yang dimaksud adalah 'employees' yaitu orang yang bekerja di institusi tersebut.

× We want to create a supportive and and comfortable environment for students.

✓ We want to create a supportive and comfortable environment for students.

There is a repeated word 'and' which is a typographical error and should be removed. Kesalahan ini adalah pengulangan kata 'and' yang tidak perlu dan harus dihapus.

× Yes, I think it's a good place to work because we work with Islamic values so we are like family but sometimes a conflict begin because we have much female stuff.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good place to work because we work with Islamic values so we are like family but sometimes a conflict begins because we have many female staff.

'A conflict begin' should be 'a conflict begins' to agree with singular subject 'conflict'. 'Much female stuff' is incorrect; 'much' is used with uncountable nouns and 'stuff' is informal and incorrect here; 'many female staff' is correct. Kesalahan ini karena kata kerja 'begin' harus disesuaikan menjadi 'begins' untuk subjek tunggal 'conflict'. 'Much' tidak tepat digunakan dengan kata benda jamak 'staff' dan 'stuff' salah konteks; sebaiknya menggunakan 'many female staff'.

× So uh decisions are bi based by feelings.

✓ So, decisions are biased by feelings.

'Bi based' is incorrect; the correct word is 'biased'. Also, 'uh' is a filler and can be omitted in formal speech. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan kata yang salah 'bi based' yang seharusnya 'biased'. Kata 'uh' adalah pengisi dan sebaiknya dihilangkan dalam konteks formal.

× Yes, I like the place where I work because it's very natural, have many trees and far from the bogus city so it's make me relaxing, calm because we don't hurt much transportation noises or polishing.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work because it's very natural, has many trees and is far from the busy city so it makes me relaxed and calm because we don't hear much transportation noise or pollution.

'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'It's make' should be 'it makes'. 'Relaxing' should be 'relaxed' to describe the speaker's feeling. 'Bogus city' is incorrect; likely meant 'busy city'. 'Hurt' should be 'hear'. 'Noises' should be 'noise' as uncountable. 'Polishing' is incorrect; likely meant 'pollution'. Kesalahan ini karena kesalahan subjek-kata kerja ('have' menjadi 'has'), kesalahan bentuk kata kerja ('make' menjadi 'makes'), penggunaan kata sifat yang salah ('relaxing' menjadi 'relaxed'), dan penggunaan kata yang salah ('bogus' menjadi 'busy', 'hurt' menjadi 'hear', 'noises' menjadi 'noise', 'polishing' menjadi 'pollution').

× Actually I don't have yet about my career for the future, but for now I want to do the best I can as HR manager.

✓ Actually, I don't have any plans yet about my career for the future, but for now I want to do the best I can as an HR manager.

The phrase 'don't have yet about my career' is incomplete and unclear; adding 'any plans' clarifies meaning. Also, 'an' is needed before 'HR manager' because 'H' is pronounced with a vowel sound. Kesalahan ini karena kalimat tidak lengkap dan tidak jelas, sehingga perlu ditambahkan 'any plans' untuk memperjelas. Selain itu, artikel 'an' diperlukan sebelum 'HR manager' karena pengucapan huruf 'H' dimulai dengan suara vokal.

× So I should learn much more about HR and being productive to do the best I can.

✓ So I should learn much more about HR and be productive to do the best I can.

After 'should', the base form of the verb is used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'being' should be 'be'. Kesalahan ini karena setelah modal 'should' harus menggunakan bentuk dasar kata kerja, bukan bentuk '-ing'.