Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use the correct tense and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, make your answer more natural and clear by structuring it with a topic sentence and supporting details. For example, mention your past job clearly and explain briefly what you did.

Ví dụ: Two years ago, I worked as a kindergarten teacher. I taught young children how to pronounce letters using phonics methods, which helped them learn English effectively.

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating filler words and be more precise. Start with a clear topic sentence and add specific details about your workplace and the age group you teach.

Ví dụ: I work at a private kindergarten where I teach children aged four to six years old.

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and grammar. Use correct expressions and avoid redundancy. Explain your opinion clearly and provide reasons with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, it was a good place to work; however, the salary was quite low, so I only worked there for one year before leaving.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about what you like. Avoid unclear phrases like 'on the war'.

Ví dụ: I like the classroom because we decorated it together with the children, adding cartoons and letters on the walls to create a fun learning environment.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and grammar, avoid filler words, and organise your answer logically. Clearly state your achievement and future plans with linking words.

Ví dụ: I completed my studies last year and obtained a higher diploma in English language studies. Therefore, my future plan is to become a teacher in a public school.

× Before, uh, two years ago, I work as a teacher in kindergarten.

✓ Before, uh, two years ago, I worked as a teacher in kindergarten.

The sentence refers to a past time ('two years ago'), so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Work' is present tense; it should be 'worked' to match the past time reference.

× I teach students UH Casey 1 and Casey 2. How to, uh, say the letters by using, umm, It's very phonics.

✓ I taught students UH Casey 1 and Casey 2 how to say the letters by using phonics.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses 'by using, umm, It's very phonics' incorrectly. 'Phonics' is a method, so 'using phonics' is correct. Also, 'teach' should be past tense 'taught' to match the past time frame. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I work in private school, uh, kindergarten school, uh, I teach students, uh, from age 4 to age 6.

✓ I work in a private kindergarten school. I teach students from age 4 to age 6.

The phrase 'in private school, uh, kindergarten school' is awkward and missing an article. 'A private kindergarten school' is correct. Also, splitting into two sentences improves clarity.

× Yes, it's good to place, but the the currency is very low, so I didn't complete uh, the job only I employ A1 years and I left that work.

✓ Yes, it's a good place, but the salary is very low, so I didn't complete the job. I was employed for one year and then I left that work.

'Good to place' is incorrect; it should be 'good place'. 'Currency' is incorrect in this context; 'salary' is appropriate. 'Employ A1 years' is unclear; corrected to 'was employed for one year'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I like the classroom because we designed the class with the children and make some cartoons but also some letters on the on the war.

✓ I like the classroom because we designed the class with the children and made some cartoons and also some letters on the wall.

'Make' should be past tense 'made' to match past action. 'On the war' is a mispronunciation or typo; it should be 'on the wall'. The conjunction 'but also' is better replaced with 'and also' for correct coordination.

× I complete my study, uh, last year, uh, so I obtained a higher, uh, diploma English language studies.

✓ I completed my studies last year, so I obtained a higher diploma in English language studies.

'Complete' should be past tense 'completed' to match 'last year'. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' as it refers to academic work. Added 'in' before 'English language studies' for correct preposition use.

× So, uh, my future works is, uh, became a teacher, uh, in the, uh, public school.

✓ So, my future work is to become a teacher in a public school.

'Works' should be singular 'work' as it refers to future plans. 'Is' should be followed by the infinitive 'to become' not past tense 'became'. Added 'a' before 'public school' for correct article usage.