Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, say "I graduated last month and now work part-time as a columnist and a designer."

Ví dụ: I graduated last month, and currently, I work part-time as a columnist and a designer.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and has grammatical errors. Try to make it more natural and concise, and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I usually work from home, but since it can be tiring and distracting, I often go to a nearby coffee shop or library to work as a freelancer."

Ví dụ: I usually work from home, but since it can be tiring and distracting, I often go to a nearby coffee shop or library to work as a freelancer.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be more fluent and natural. Use linking words and correct prepositions. For example, "Yes, I like working in the library because it is quiet, which helps me concentrate. Also, it has many books and references I need for my job."

Ví dụ: Yes, I like working in the library because it is quiet, which helps me concentrate. Also, it has many books and references I need for my job.

Gợi ý: Your answer repeats previous points and has some grammar mistakes. Try to vary your vocabulary and improve sentence structure. For example, "Yes, I definitely enjoy working in the library because it's quiet and helps me focus. Additionally, it's a community hub where I can meet new people."

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely enjoy working in the library because it's quiet and helps me focus. Additionally, it's a community hub where I can meet new people.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be more fluent and natural. Use linking words and correct phrasing. For example, "I hope to work in publishing because I enjoy reading and writing. An editor position would suit me well, so I am planning to send my resume soon and hope to get the job."

Ví dụ: I hope to work in publishing because I enjoy reading and writing. An editor position would suit me well, so I am planning to send my resume soon and hope to get the job.

× I just graduated from last month so now I am a part time columnist and also I do design job so it's counted as a part time.

✓ I just graduated last month, so now I am a part-time columnist and also I do design jobs, so it's counted as part-time.

The phrase 'graduated from last month' is incorrect; 'graduated last month' is the correct past tense expression. Also, 'design job' should be pluralized to 'design jobs' to match the context. 'Part time' should be hyphenated as 'part-time' when used as an adjective.

× I work from home but because working at home is easily to feel tired and want to lay on bed, so usually I will go to the coffee shop or the library near me so I can have my work at there.

✓ I work from home, but because working at home makes me easily feel tired and want to lie on the bed, I usually go to the coffee shop or the library near me so I can do my work there.

The phrase 'easily to feel tired' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me easily feel tired'. 'Want to lay on bed' is incorrect because 'lay' requires an object; the correct verb is 'lie' and 'on bed' should be 'on the bed'. 'Have my work at there' is incorrect; it should be 'do my work there'.

× Yes, actually I like to work in library. Library is a quiet place and I can make concentration on my work and library has a lot of books and some reference which I need in my job so I can read it there.

✓ Yes, actually I like to work in the library. The library is a quiet place and I can concentrate on my work. The library has a lot of books and some references which I need for my job, so I can read them there.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. 'Make concentration on my work' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'concentrate on my work'. 'Some reference' should be plural 'some references'. 'Which I need in my job' should be 'which I need for my job'. 'Read it' should be 'read them' to agree with the plural 'references'.

× Yes definitely I like to work in library. Library is a quiet place and I can focusing on my work at there. Also library is a middle of heart in the community so I can meet new friends there.

✓ Yes, definitely I like to work in the library. The library is a quiet place and I can focus on my work there. Also, the library is the heart of the community, so I can meet new friends there.

Again, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'I can focusing' is incorrect; it should be 'I can focus'. 'At there' is incorrect; 'there' alone is sufficient. 'Library is a middle of heart' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'the heart of the community'.

× I hope I can get a job in publication. I like to read and I like to write. Maybe an editor job is very suitable for me. And now I am planning to send my resume to them and hopefully I can get my job in very soon.

✓ I hope I can get a job in publishing. I like to read and write. Maybe an editor job is very suitable for me. Now I am planning to send my resume to them, and hopefully I can get a job very soon.

'Job in publication' is better expressed as 'job in publishing'. 'I like to read and I like to write' can be simplified to 'I like to read and write'. 'Get my job in very soon' is incorrect; it should be 'get a job very soon'. The phrase 'and now' is better as 'Now' to improve sentence flow.