Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Also, use correct verb tenses and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. For example, say "I have been working as a dentist for over 10 years, both in my private office and several clinics. I find it satisfying to educate people about oral health and improve their quality of life."

Ví dụ: I have been working as a dentist for over 10 years, both in my private office and several clinics. I find it satisfying to educate people about oral health and improve their quality of life.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like "uh" and try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, be careful with plural forms and article usage, for example, say "digital equipment" instead of "digital equipments."

Ví dụ: Currently, I work in my hometown Shiraz, but I previously worked in Isfahan, a nearby city. In the future, I plan to stay in Shiraz and expand my office by adding more facilities and digital equipment to help more patients.

Gợi ý: Make sure to use correct article forms and plural/singular agreement, for example, "great radiographic facilities" without "a." Also, complete your sentences fully and avoid incomplete endings. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe Shiraz is a good place for dentistry because it offers many digital laboratories and great radiographic facilities, which enhance our work as dentists.

Gợi ý: Try to use linking words like "because" and "and" properly to connect your ideas. Also, avoid run-on sentences by breaking them into shorter, clearer sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I currently work in dental clinics that are very convenient and patient-friendly because they have their own radiographic center. Moreover, my colleagues are friendly and experienced, which motivates me to work.

Gợi ý: Pay attention to article usage, for example, "an advanced implantology course." Also, avoid small mistakes like "ioffer" instead of "I offer." Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Recently, I attended an advanced implantology course, which helps me to insert dental implants for my patients. In the future, I plan to expand the treatments I offer to my patients.

× Actually, I am a dentist working both in my private office and in several dental clinics and I am being I am working as a dentist for over 10 years and it gives me a sense of satisfaction when I educate people about their oral health and improve their quality.

✓ Actually, I am a dentist working both in my private office and in several dental clinics and I have been working as a dentist for over 10 years and it gives me a sense of satisfaction when I educate people about their oral health and improve their quality.

The phrase 'I am being I am working' is incorrect. The correct form to express an action continuing over a period of time up to now is the present perfect continuous tense 'I have been working'. This tense shows the duration of the action from the past until now.

× Uh, now I, I work in my hometown Shiraz, but previously I've worked in Isfahan, which is nearby city.

✓ Uh, now I work in my hometown Shiraz, but previously I've worked in Isfahan, which is a nearby city.

The phrase 'nearby city' requires an article before 'nearby city' because it is a singular countable noun. The correct form is 'a nearby city'.

× And in the future I have planned to stay in Shiraz and expand my office in terms of, uh, facilities and, uh, digital equipments which help, uh, more patients.

✓ And in the future I have planned to stay in Shiraz and expand my office in terms of, uh, facilities and, uh, digital equipment which help, uh, more patients.

The word 'equipment' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'equipments'. Using 'equipment' without 's' is correct.

× Yes, I believe that Shiraz is a good place for dentistry as it offers many digital laboratories and a great radiographic facilities which can enhance our job as a dentist.

✓ Yes, I believe that Shiraz is a good place for dentistry as it offers many digital laboratories and great radiographic facilities which can enhance our job as dentists.

The phrase 'a great radiographic facilities' is incorrect because 'facilities' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'our job as a dentist' should be plural 'dentists' to agree with 'our'.

× Yes, currently I work in dental clinics that are very convenient and patient friendly because they own their radiographic center and besides my colleagues are very friendly and experienced which motivates me to work.

✓ Yes, currently I work in dental clinics that are very convenient and patient friendly because they own their radiographic centers and besides, my colleagues are very friendly and experienced which motivates me to work.

The word 'center' should be plural 'centers' to agree with 'clinics' (plural). Also, a comma after 'besides' improves clarity.

× Recently I have attended a advanced implantology course which helps me to insert in dental implants for my patients and in the future I will expand my treatments ioffer to my patients.

✓ Recently I have attended an advanced implantology course which helps me to insert dental implants for my patients and in the future I will expand my treatment offer to my patients.

The article before 'advanced' should be 'an' because 'advanced' starts with a vowel sound. The phrase 'insert in dental implants' is incorrect; it should be 'insert dental implants'. Also, 'treatments ioffer' is a typo and should be 'treatment offer'.