Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat clear but lacks natural phrasing and detail. Try to directly state your job role and briefly describe your main responsibilities in a more natural way, avoiding redundancy and vague phrases.

Ví dụ: I currently work as a banking professional, where I handle various documents and files related to banking operations.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar errors and unclear phrases. Use correct job titles and verb tenses, and connect your ideas with linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: I work at a bank as a credit assistant. I review loan applications and carefully check all the details related to the loans and their financial arrangements.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains awkward expressions. Try to clearly express your opinion about the workplace, explain why you find it comfortable or motivating, and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, my workplace is very comfortable and supportive. It motivates me to work hard every day and helps me improve my skills and performance.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your feelings about your workplace clearly, mention teamwork, and explain how it contributes to your success using linking words.

Ví dụ: I really enjoy working at my workplace because we collaborate as a team. Together, we generate many ideas that help us successfully complete our projects.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat vague and contains grammar mistakes. Try to clearly state your future plans, explain your reasons, and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I plan to go abroad to study political systems because I want to understand how politics affects the banking sector in my country. This knowledge will help me contribute valuable information to improve our banking industry.

× Currently I am working as a banking professional.

✓ Currently, I work as a banking professional.

The present simple tense is more appropriate here to describe a current job or occupation rather than the present continuous tense, which is used for temporary actions or ongoing activities.

× My work is to take the bank's documents and different types of files.

✓ My work is to handle the bank's documents and different types of files.

The verb 'take' is not the correct choice here; 'handle' or 'manage' better describes the responsibility of dealing with documents and files.

× I am working at a bank as a credit assistance.

✓ I am working at a bank as a credit assistant.

The word 'assistance' is a noun meaning help, but the correct job title is 'assistant'. Also, 'at a bank' is correct preposition usage here.

× I check the loans of the applicants.

✓ I check the applicants' loans.

The phrase 'loans of the applicants' is grammatically correct but less natural; using the possessive form 'applicants'' is more fluent and concise.

× I review all the loans application documents.

✓ I review all the loan application documents.

The phrase 'loans application' is incorrect; 'loan application' should be singular as it modifies 'documents' collectively.

× I checked here all dear details about the loan and the arrangement of money.

✓ Here, I check all the important details about the loan and the arrangement of money.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing. 'Checked' should be 'check' to match present tense, 'dear' is incorrect and should be 'important', and the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yes, my working place is so comfortable and suitable for every every stop where I work.

✓ Yes, my workplace is very comfortable and suitable for every aspect of my work.

'Working place' should be 'workplace' as one word; 'every every stop' is a repetition and unclear, replaced with 'every aspect'; 'so' is less formal than 'very' in this context.

× I am really convenient and motivate to work daily.

✓ I am really comfortable and motivated to work daily.

'Convenient' is an adjective describing things, not people; 'comfortable' is correct here. 'Motivate' is a verb; the correct adjective form is 'motivated'.

× It has to enhance my capability and performance.

✓ It helps enhance my capability and performance.

The phrase 'has to enhance' is incorrect here; 'helps enhance' correctly expresses that the workplace contributes to improving skills and performance.

× There is lots of work which we are done with our groups.

✓ There is a lot of work that we do with our group.

'Lots of' should be 'a lot of' in formal speech; 'which we are done' is incorrect, should be 'that we do'; 'groups' should be singular 'group' if referring to one team.

× We create lots of ideas to generate our recent doing projects with success in our process.

✓ We generate many ideas to successfully complete our current projects.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear; 'create lots of ideas' is better as 'generate many ideas'; 'recent doing projects' is incorrect, replaced with 'current projects'; 'with success in our process' is simplified to 'successfully complete'.

× Our workplace is so suitable.

✓ Our workplace is very suitable.

'So' is less formal and less precise than 'very' in this context.

× Well, I need to think about it, but my future plans is to go abroad and read about political systems.

✓ Well, I need to think about it, but my future plans are to go abroad and study political systems.

'Plans' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'; 'read about' is less appropriate than 'study' in this context.

× I want to improve political background of our country that related to banking sector.

✓ I want to improve the political background of our country related to the banking sector.

Missing definite articles 'the' before 'political background' and 'banking sector'; 'that related' should be 'related' as a past participle adjective.

× I want to create lots of information about it.

✓ I want to create a lot of information about it.

'Lots of' is informal; 'a lot of' is more appropriate in formal speech.