Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构较复杂且有语法错误，如“I'm current a student”应为“I'm currently a student”。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I work in the exhibition and conference industry, organizing events and managing exhibitions. At the same time, I am currently a Business Administration student at Shanghai International Studies University. I study to improve my management skills and advance my career.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“which based in Shanghai Pudong and is well known in the industry is belongs to a large enterprises”结构混乱。建议使用简单句，明确表达公司位置和性质。

Ví dụ: I work at the exhibition hall's office in Shanghai. My company, Citizen Miles, is based in Shanghai Pudong and is well known in the industry. It belongs to a large enterprise.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整，但“colleges”应为“colleagues”，且“offer”应为“offers”。建议注意单复数和动词形式，提升语言准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. The colleagues are nice and help each other. There are opportunities to learn new things and grow in my career. The company also offers good benefits and tries to balance work and life.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰，如“pre present place”不合适，且“That's it”显得突兀。建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子表达感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I really enjoy my workplace because the environment is friendly and supportive. This makes it a pleasant place to work, which is very important to me. Additionally, the company offers opportunities for professional development.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够流畅，句子结构不完整，如“continue and combine with my expertise”不明确。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达未来计划和学习目的。

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to continue working in the exhibition and conference industry, combining it with my expertise. I plan to focus on art and digital exhibitions. This is why I chose to study abroad, especially this major.

× I work in the exhibition and conference industry, which involves organizing event and management exhibitions and at the same time, I'm current a student major in Business Administration at Shanghai International Studies University because I want to improve my management skills and advance my career.

✓ I work in the exhibition and conference industry, which involves organizing events and managing exhibitions, and at the same time, I'm currently a student majoring in Business Administration at Shanghai International Studies University because I want to improve my management skills and advance my career.

event 应为复数 events，因为这里指多个活动；management exhibitions 应改为 managing exhibitions，动词形式错误；current 应为 currently，副词修饰动词；major 应用现在分词形式 majoring，表示正在学习的专业。

× I work in the exhibition Hall's office in the city of Shanghai. My company name is Citizen Miles, which based in Shanghai Pudong and is well known in the industry is belongs to a large enterprises.

✓ I work in the exhibition hall's office in the city of Shanghai. My company name is Citizen Miles, which is based in Shanghai Pudong and is well known in the industry and belongs to a large enterprise.

Hall 不需要大写；which based 应为 which is based，缺少系动词；is belongs 应为 belongs，动词重复；enterprises 应为 enterprise，单数形式。

× The colleges are nice and help each other.

✓ The colleagues are nice and help each other.

colleges（大学）应为 colleagues（同事），词汇错误。

× The company also offer good benefits and tries to balance work and life.

✓ The company also offers good benefits and tries to balance work and life.

company 是单数，动词应为 offers，主谓一致错误。

× Yes, definitely. I really enjoy my workplace, the environment is friendly and supportive which makes it a pre present place to be the most important for me.

✓ Yes, definitely. I really enjoy my workplace; the environment is friendly and supportive, which makes it a pleasant place and the most important for me.

pre present 应为 pleasant，拼写错误；句子结构需调整以表达清晰。

× That's it. It offers opportunity for grants.

✓ That's it. It offers opportunities for growth.

opportunity 应为复数 opportunities；for grants 语义不通，应为 for growth，表达职业发展机会。

× In future, I would like to engage in the exhibition and conference industry, continue and combine with my expertise, but I will try to focus on the art and digital exhibitions.

✓ In the future, I would like to engage in the exhibition and conference industry, continue and combine with my expertise, but I will focus on art and digital exhibitions.

would like 表达愿望，后面不需要 try to，直接用 will focus 更自然。

× That's the reason why I choose to study abroad, especially on the major for that.

✓ That's the reason why I chose to study abroad, especially for that major.

choose 应用过去式 chose；on the major 应为 for that major，介词使用错误。