Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I'm a postgraduate student and my major is medical chemistry.
Giám khảo
Where do you work?>
Thí sinh
Now I'm in a research institution.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to work?
Thí sinh
Yes, there is a good place to work because my main work is to do some experiments and there are a very fundamental laboratory.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I really like the place because there are not only have a fundamental laboratory, but also a beautiful things make me relax.
Giám khảo
What are your future work plans?
Thí sinh
After I finish my graduate study, I plan to get a PhD degree in medical chemistry.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时应更自然流畅,避免直译,且补充更多细节以丰富内容。
Ví dụ: I am currently pursuing my postgraduate studies in medicinal chemistry, which involves studying the design and development of pharmaceutical drugs.
Where do you work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺乏细节和连贯性,建议补充具体机构名称或工作内容,并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: I am currently working at a research institution that focuses on pharmaceutical development, where I assist in conducting various experiments.
Is it a good place to work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 表达不够自然,语法错误较多,建议使用更准确的表达并补充具体原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, it's a great place to work because I get to conduct important experiments in a well-equipped laboratory, which helps me gain valuable experience.
Would you like the place where you work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 语法错误明显,表达不清晰,建议简化句子结构并具体描述喜欢的原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy working there because the laboratory is well-equipped, and the surroundings are beautiful, which helps me relax during breaks.
What are your future work plans?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但可以更自然并补充未来计划的具体内容。
Ví dụ: After completing my postgraduate studies, I plan to pursue a PhD in medicinal chemistry to deepen my research skills and contribute to drug development.
× Yes, there is a good place to work because my main work is to do some experiments and there are a very fundamental laboratory.
✓ Yes, it is a good place to work because my main work is to do some experiments and there is a very fundamental laboratory.
句中使用了 'there is' 和 'there are',但 'a very fundamental laboratory' 是单数,应该用 'there is'。此外,'there is a good place' 应改为 'it is a good place',因为这里指代的是具体的地方,而不是存在某物。
× Yes, I really like the place because there are not only have a fundamental laboratory, but also a beautiful things make me relax.
✓ Yes, I really like the place because it not only has a fundamental laboratory, but also beautiful things that make me relax.
句中 'there are not only have' 结构错误,应该用 'it not only has' 来指代 'the place'。'a beautiful things' 中 'things' 是复数,前面不应加不定冠词 'a'。此外,缺少关系代词 'that' 来连接从句。