Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I was international students in Canada a couple years ago. Right now, uh, currently I am working. I'm a freelance.
Giám khảo
Where do you work?>
Thí sinh
Oh, you're like, I work at home, which means I have a flexible time, but sometimes when I work with the, uh, foreigner and I have to get up very early or stay up very late because we have the time gap.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a great patient on my work. All of my colleague they uh, same age of me, so they're very easy going.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you work?
Thí sinh
I like my place where I work because it's based in my hometown, but I'm not your local to office because we usually work at home.
Giám khảo
What are your future work plans?
Thí sinh
I think I need to improve my skill from my colleague who has a variety experience.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答时应注意语法正确性,例如“students”应为“student”,并且表达应更自然流畅。建议简洁明了地回答问题,避免语气词“uh”。
Ví dụ: I was an international student in Canada a couple of years ago. Currently, I am working as a freelancer.
Where do you work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答应避免口语填充词如“uh”和不必要的重复,表达应更连贯。可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: I work from home, which gives me flexible hours. However, sometimes I have to adjust my schedule to communicate with foreign clients due to the time difference.
Is it a good place to work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,如“great patient”应为“great environment”或类似表达。建议使用准确词汇并注意主谓一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a great working environment. All my colleagues are around my age, so we get along very well.
Would you like the place where you work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰,语法错误较多。建议简化句子结构,明确表达自己的观点。
Ví dụ: I like my workplace because it is based in my hometown. However, I usually work from home rather than going to the office.
What are your future work plans?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误影响理解,如“improve my skill from my colleague”应改为“learn skills from my colleagues”。建议使用正确的表达方式并丰富内容。
Ví dụ: I plan to improve my skills by learning from my colleagues who have diverse experiences.
× I was international students in Canada a couple years ago.
✓ I was an international student in Canada a couple of years ago.
这里的主语是单数第一人称“I”,所以“students”应改为单数形式“student”。另外,“a couple years ago”应改为“a couple of years ago”,表示“几年前”。
× I'm a freelance.
✓ I'm a freelancer.
“freelance”是形容词或副词,表示自由职业的,名词形式应为“freelancer”。
× Oh, you're like, I work at home, which means I have a flexible time, but sometimes when I work with the, uh, foreigner and I have to get up very early or stay up very late because we have the time gap.
✓ Oh, I work at home, which means I have flexible time, but sometimes when I work with foreigners, I have to get up very early or stay up very late because we have a time difference.
“you're like”不合适,应去掉;“foreigner”应使用复数形式“foreigners”;“the time gap”应改为“a time difference”,更符合表达习惯。
× Yes, I have a great patient on my work.
✓ Yes, I have great patience in my work.
“patient”是“病人”的意思,应该用“patience”表示“耐心”;“on my work”应改为“in my work”,表示在工作中。
× All of my colleague they uh, same age of me, so they're very easy going.
✓ All of my colleagues are the same age as me, so they're very easy-going.
“colleague”应为复数“colleagues”;“they”与前面重复,应去掉;“same age of me”应改为“the same age as me”;“easy going”应加连字符,变为“easy-going”。
× I like my place where I work because it's based in my hometown, but I'm not your local to office because we usually work at home.
✓ I like the place where I work because it's based in my hometown, but I'm not a local to the office because we usually work at home.
“my place”改为“the place”更自然;“your local to office”应改为“a local to the office”,冠词和代词使用错误。
× I think I need to improve my skill from my colleague who has a variety experience.
✓ I think I need to improve my skills from my colleague who has a variety of experience.
“skill”应为复数“skills”;“a variety experience”应为“a variety of experience”,缺少介词“of”。