Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is informative but contains some unclear phrases and grammatical errors, such as "China's deconstruction engineering my wall" and "tender beats." Try to use clearer and more accurate vocabulary, and keep sentences concise and grammatically correct. Also, avoid redundancy by combining related ideas effectively.

Ví dụ: I work as a Tender Project Coordinator at the Malaysia branch of a construction company. My role involves managing tender bids and coordinating with various teams to ensure smooth preparation and submission of tenders.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally good with specific details and clear description. However, watch out for minor grammar issues such as unnecessary capitalization and sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I work at our Sindhu office, which is located next to the Sindhu train station in the heart of Kuala Lumpur. The building is an old colonial structure with charming traditional architecture, and I really appreciate its beautifully landscaped surroundings.

Gợi ý: Your answer is positive and clear but slightly repetitive with the word "comfortable." Try to vary your vocabulary and use linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: Our office is a wonderful place to work because it offers a pleasant and comfortable environment. Moreover, the atmosphere is professional yet welcoming, which makes it enjoyable for everyone.

Gợi ý: Your answer has unclear and confusing phrases like "Pass and they abandon the cultural history." Make sure your sentences are clear and directly related to the question. Provide specific reasons and avoid unrelated or unclear statements.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like my workplace because the office design reflects the area's rich railway heritage, preserving the cultural history of Kuala Lumpur.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant with good structure. To improve, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and check tense consistency for natural flow.

Ví dụ: After seven years in the construction industry, my excitement has gradually faded. Therefore, I plan to switch to another industry soon, and currently, I am focusing on improving my English communication skills.

× I work as the Tender Project Coordinator at the Malaysia branch in China's deconstruction engineering my wall.

✓ I work as the Tender Project Coordinator at the Malaysia branch of China's deconstruction engineering company.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'China's deconstruction engineering my wall'. It should be 'of' to indicate the branch belonging to the company. Also, 'my wall' seems to be a mishearing or typo and is removed for clarity.

× My role involves managing tender beats and coordinate with diverse teams to ensure the smooth execution of tender preparations.

✓ My role involves managing tender bids and coordinating with diverse teams to ensure the smooth execution of tender preparations.

The word 'beats' is incorrect; it should be 'bids' (plural). Also, after 'involves', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'coordinate' should be 'coordinating' to maintain parallel structure.

× I work in our Sindhu office, which is located next to the Sindhu train station in the heart of Kuala Lumpur.

✓ I work in our Sindhu office, which is located next to the Sindhu train station in the heart of Kuala Lumpur.

No correction needed here; the use of 'the' before 'Sindhu train station' is correct as it refers to a specific station.

× The central old colonial building exhibits A charming traditional architecture style and I really appreciate its beautifully landscaped surroundings.

✓ The central old colonial building exhibits a charming traditional architectural style and I really appreciate its beautifully landscaped surroundings.

The word 'architecture' should be the adjective 'architectural' to correctly describe 'style'. Also, 'A' should be lowercase 'a' as it is in the middle of the sentence.

× Our office is absolutely a wonderful workplace because it provides us with a pleasant and comfortable working environment.

✓ Our office is absolutely a wonderful workplace because it provides us a pleasant and comfortable working environment.

The preposition 'with' after 'provides us' is unnecessary and can be omitted for correct usage.

× Besides, the atmosphere is both professional and comfortable for people to come.

✓ Besides, the atmosphere is both professional and comfortable for people to work in.

The phrase 'for people to come' is incomplete and unclear. It should specify the activity, such as 'to work in', to make sense.

× Yes, I like the place of work because the design of the office reflects the areas rich railway heritage.

✓ Yes, I like the place of work because the design of the office reflects the area's rich railway heritage.

The word 'areas' should be possessive 'area's' to indicate that the railway heritage belongs to the area.

× Pass and they abandon the cultural history of Kuala Lumpur.

✓ Past and they have preserved the cultural history of Kuala Lumpur.

The sentence is unclear and seems incorrect. Possibly intended to say 'Past and they have preserved the cultural history of Kuala Lumpur.' The original sentence lacks proper structure and meaning.

× After seven years of working in construction industry, I feel that excitement had gradually faded.

✓ After seven years of working in the construction industry, I feel that the excitement has gradually faded.

The past perfect tense 'had faded' is incorrect here because the feeling is current. Present perfect 'has faded' is appropriate. Also, 'construction industry' needs the definite article 'the'.

× After seven years of working in construction industry, I feel that excitement had gradually faded.

✓ After seven years of working in the construction industry, I feel that excitement has gradually faded.

The phrase 'construction industry' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the industry.

× I plan to switch to another industry in the near future, so now I'm concentrating on enhancing my English communication skills.

✓ I plan to switch to another industry in the near future, so now I'm concentrating on enhancing my English communication skills.

No correction needed; the sentence correctly uses future intention and present continuous tense.