Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误，如“how financial systems works”应为“how financial systems work”，且句子稍显冗长。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致。

Ví dụ: I'm currently a student at Southwestern University, specializing in law and finance. I chose this field because I'm interested in how legal and financial systems operate.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“have had never worked”应为“have never worked”。建议使用更自然的表达，避免重复“currently a student”。

Ví dụ: I haven't worked yet because I'm still a student. However, I hope to find an internship in the future to gain some practical experience.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误和表达不够自然，如“good atmosphere”应为“a good atmosphere”，“the new opportunities”表达不清。建议使用更地道的表达并注意冠词使用。

Ví dụ: Although I haven't worked before, I believe a good workplace should have a positive atmosphere and strong teamwork. It's also important to have opportunities to learn practical skills.

Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，如“if a place to work, have good atmosphere and very friendly to me”不通顺。建议简化句子，使用正确的条件句结构。

Ví dụ: Since I haven't worked yet, I imagine I would enjoy working in a place with a friendly atmosphere and supportive colleagues.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“I could be I can be”。“cooperation law”表达不准确，应为“corporate law”。建议表达更清晰，避免重复。

Ví dụ: As a law and finance student, I hope to become a corporate lawyer in the future. Additionally, I am interested in advocating for children's rights to apply my knowledge and gain practical experience.

× I choose this field because I'm interested in how law systems work and how financial systems works.

✓ I choose this field because I'm interested in how legal systems work and how financial systems work.

这里的“law systems”和“financial systems”应使用复数形式“legal systems”和“financial systems”，且谓语动词应与复数主语一致，使用“work”而非“works”。

× I'm currently a student and I have had never worked before.

✓ I'm currently a student and I have never worked before.

“have had never worked”中“had”多余，正确用法是现在完成时“have never worked”。

× I'm focusing on my study now, but in the future I hope I can find an internship to gain some work experience.

✓ I'm focusing on my studies now, but in the future I hope I can find an internship to gain some work experience.

“study”应使用复数形式“studies”，表示学习的各个方面。

× a good place to work should have good atmosphere and good teamwork.

✓ a good place to work should have a good atmosphere and good teamwork.

“atmosphere”是不可数名词，前面需要加冠词“a”表示“一种良好的氛围”。

× Also, the new opportunities to learn some practical skills is important too.

✓ Also, new opportunities to learn some practical skills are important too.

“opportunities”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，且“the”不必要。

× if a place to work, have good atmosphere and very friendly to me, I would love it.

✓ if a place to work has a good atmosphere and is very friendly to me, I would love it.

缺少谓语动词“has”和“is”，且“atmosphere”前需加冠词“a”。

× I hope I can be a lawyer in cooperation law in the future.

✓ I hope I can be a lawyer in corporate law in the future.

“cooperation law”应为“corporate law”，表示“公司法”，是固定搭配。

× Besides, I also think I could be I can be a lawyer to fight for children's rights so that I can combine my knowledge and practical experience.

✓ Besides, I also think I can be a lawyer to fight for children's rights so that I can combine my knowledge and practical experience.

句中“I could be I can be”重复，应删除“could be”，保持句子结构正确。