Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add supporting details without redundancy. Avoid grammatical errors and awkward phrasing like "or last year" and "at abroad."

Ví dụ: I am currently not working or studying. I completed my BHMS degree last year and worked at a private hospital, but I recently resigned to pursue further studies abroad.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'it's uh' to make your answer more fluent and natural. Also, provide clearer and more specific information about the hospital and your work. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I am not working currently, but I previously worked at Patel Hospital, a renowned hospital in my hometown. It specializes in kinetic therapy and outpatient services, and I worked there for almost six months.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and avoid repetition. Also, improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Provide specific examples of what makes the place good.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a very good place to work because the staff are cooperative and friendly. Moreover, the teamwork is excellent, which helped me gain knowledge in different areas.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and improve fluency by using varied vocabulary and linking words. Make your answer more concise and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved working there because the environment was pleasant, and the staff were very cooperative. Additionally, I learned a lot by working in a team and exploring different areas.

Gợi ý: Try to speak more fluently without filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and be specific about your plans.

Ví dụ: I am getting married next year, and after that, I plan to move to Canada. Since I have a bachelor's degree in healthcare, I intend to continue working in this sector and pursue a master's degree there.

× I am neither working nor studying or last year I have completed my study in BHMS.

✓ I am neither working nor studying. Last year, I completed my studies in BHMS.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'neither...nor' with 'or' and uses present perfect tense 'have completed' with a past time reference 'last year'. The correct form is to separate the ideas into two sentences and use simple past tense for completed actions in the past.

× After that I started working at a private hospital but recently I resigned my job for my further studies at abroad.

✓ After that, I started working at a private hospital, but recently I resigned from my job to pursue further studies abroad.

The verb 'resigned' should be followed by 'from' when referring to a job. Also, 'for my further studies at abroad' is incorrect; it should be 'to pursue further studies abroad'. The preposition 'at' is not used with 'abroad'.

× Uh, as I said, I'm not working currently, but uh, I have worked at private hospital.

✓ Uh, as I said, I'm not working currently, but uh, I have worked at a private hospital.

The noun 'private hospital' requires an indefinite article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun and not previously mentioned.

× Uh, it is, uh, it's uh, called Patel Hospital. It's uh, renowned hospital in my hometown.

✓ Uh, it is, uh, it's uh, called Patel Hospital. It's a renowned hospital in my hometown.

The noun 'renowned hospital' needs the indefinite article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun being introduced for the first time.

× And uh, it's uh, speciality is kinetic and OPS and I have worked for almost 6 months.

✓ And uh, its speciality is kinetic and OPS, and I have worked there for almost 6 months.

The possessive pronoun 'its' should not have an apostrophe. Also, 'worked for almost 6 months' is acceptable but adding 'there' clarifies the location. A comma before 'and' improves sentence clarity.

× Yes, I think it's a very good place to work because the atmosphere at the hospital is very cooperative staff is uh, very, uh goo very good at their nature is quite nice and also the teamwork they are doing are are quite appreciable.

✓ Yes, I think it's a very good place to work because the atmosphere at the hospital is very cooperative. The staff is very good by nature, and the teamwork they do is quite appreciable.

The original sentence is a run-on with missing punctuation and unclear structure. Breaking it into shorter sentences and correcting verb agreement improves clarity.

× So I think it's a very good place and I get knowledge of different, uh.

✓ So I think it's a very good place, and I gain knowledge in different areas.

The phrase 'get knowledge of different' is incomplete and awkward. 'Gain knowledge in different areas' is a more natural and grammatically correct expression.

× Yes, I love my job where I work because I think the the the place is quite nice.

✓ Yes, I love my job where I work because I think the place is quite nice.

The repetition of 'the' is an error. Removing the extra words corrects the sentence.

× The people are very cooperative and they always do work in teamwork and also I think I get knowledge of different areas and learning something new.

✓ The people are very cooperative, and they always work as a team. Also, I think I gain knowledge in different areas and learn something new.

'Do work in teamwork' is awkward; 'work as a team' is better. 'Get knowledge of' should be 'gain knowledge in'. 'Learning' should be 'learn' to maintain parallel structure.

× So as I'm getting married in next year, after that I will save to Canada.

✓ So as I'm getting married next year, after that I will move to Canada.

'In next year' is incorrect; it should be 'next year'. Also, 'save to Canada' is incorrect; likely the intended meaning is 'move to Canada'.

× And uh, I have already completed my bachelor, uh, from in healthcare.

✓ And uh, I have already completed my bachelor's degree in healthcare.

The phrase 'from in healthcare' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to a field of study. Also, 'bachelor' should be 'bachelor's degree'.

× So I'm planning to, uh, continue in healthcare sector in Canada.

✓ So I'm planning to continue in the healthcare sector in Canada.

The phrase 'continue in healthcare sector' needs the definite article 'the' before 'healthcare sector'.

× And uh, I'm planning to do masters in Canada in healthcare.

✓ And uh, I'm planning to do a master's degree in healthcare in Canada.

'Masters' should be 'a master's degree' to be grammatically correct and clear.