Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer provides relevant information but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement and correct word choice. For example, 'I work as a schedule coordinator at a gas station. My responsibilities include coordinating between employees and management. This role helps me improve my problem-solving skills, especially when dealing with customer issues. Occasionally, I cover other roles when employees are sick.'

Ví dụ: I work as a schedule coordinator at a gas station. My responsibilities include coordinating between employees and management. This role helps me improve my problem-solving skills, especially when dealing with customer issues. Occasionally, I cover other roles when employees are sick.

Gợi ý: Your answer is informative but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct prepositions and verb forms, and avoid repetition. For example, say 'I work full-time as a schedule coordinator at a gas station. I usually work the night shift because I manage the schedule and order products for the next day to ensure customers do not face difficulties.'

Ví dụ: I work full-time as a schedule coordinator at a gas station. I usually work the night shift because I manage the schedule and order products for the next day to ensure customers do not face difficulties.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good points but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure subject-verb agreement. Also, clarify your ideas with better linking words. For example, 'Yes, it is a good place to work because the environment is calm and there are few employees, which helps me concentrate better. Additionally, my job involves coordinating between employees to prevent problems.'

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to work because the environment is calm and there are few employees, which helps me concentrate better. Additionally, my job involves coordinating between employees to prevent problems.

Gợi ý: Your answer expresses your opinion but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use clearer sentences and correct verb forms. For example, 'Yes, I like my workplace for several reasons. First, the employer cares about employees. They always inform us about vacations and schedules and maintain good communication between employees and management.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I like my workplace for several reasons. First, the employer cares about employees. They always inform us about vacations and schedules and maintain good communication between employees and management.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys your ambition but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and correct article usage. For example, 'My future plan is to become a district manager in the company because the role involves different responsibilities. Also, it is a high-paying position where I would interact with various people at different locations.'

Ví dụ: My future plan is to become a district manager in the company because the role involves different responsibilities. Also, it is a high-paying position where I would interact with various people at different locations.

× The job responsibilities includes making a coordination between employees, director and the UH employees.

✓ The job responsibilities include making coordination between employees, the director, and the UH employees.

The subject 'responsibilities' is plural, so the verb should be 'include' instead of 'includes'. Also, 'making a coordination' is incorrect; 'making coordination' or 'coordinating' is better. Added 'the' before 'director' for clarity.

× The job responsibilities includes making a coordination between employees, director and the UH employees.

✓ The job responsibilities include making coordination among employees, the director, and the UH employees.

The preposition 'between' is typically used for two entities; since there are more than two groups, 'among' is more appropriate.

× It helps to improve my skills as well such as problem solving skills, especially customers solving problems.

✓ It helps to improve my skills as well, such as problem-solving skills, especially solving customers' problems.

'Problem solving' should be hyphenated as 'problem-solving' when used as an adjective. Also, 'customers solving problems' is unclear; it should be 'solving customers' problems' to indicate the problems belong to customers.

× Sometimes I have to do the job as well because of the sickness of the employees.

✓ Sometimes I have to do the job as well because of employees' sickness.

'Because of the sickness of the employees' is wordy; 'employees' sickness' is more natural and concise.

× Most of the times I do the night shift because at the night time I have to manage the schedule as well as order the products for the next day so that customers will not facing difficulty while getting up product at the gas station.

✓ Most of the time, I do the night shift because at night I have to manage the schedule as well as order products for the next day so that customers will not face difficulty while getting products at the gas station.

'Most of the times' should be 'Most of the time'. 'At the night time' is better as 'at night'. 'Will not facing' is incorrect; it should be 'will not face'. 'Getting up product' is incorrect; it should be 'getting products'.

× Yes, definitely these are good place to work because the environment is calm and and less number of employees which helps to make concentrate better on my task.

✓ Yes, definitely this is a good place to work because the environment is calm and there are fewer employees, which helps me concentrate better on my tasks.

'These are good place' is incorrect; it should be 'this is a good place'. 'Less number of employees' should be 'fewer employees' because employees are countable. 'Helps to make concentrate' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me concentrate'.

× In addition to this, uh, I the job responsibilities include working at an action between the employees and employees so that employees do not face a problem.

✓ In addition to this, the job responsibilities include working as a liaison between the employees so that they do not face problems.

'Working at an action between' is incorrect; 'working as a liaison between' is more appropriate. Also, 'employees and employees' is redundant; simplified to 'employees'. Changed 'a problem' to 'problems' for generality.

× The employer always give reference to the employees whether it is going to on a vacation or regarding a schedule and having conversation between the employees and employers.

✓ The employer always gives notice to the employees whether they are going on vacation or regarding the schedule and facilitates conversations between employees and employers.

'Give reference' is unclear; 'gives notice' or 'informs' is better. 'It is going to on a vacation' is incorrect; 'they are going on vacation' is correct. Added 'facilitates' to clarify 'having conversation'.

× My future plan is to work as the district manager in that company because the district manager includes a different type of the responsibilities.

✓ My future plan is to work as the district manager in that company because the district manager has different types of responsibilities.

'Includes a different type of the responsibilities' is awkward; 'has different types of responsibilities' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× In addition to this, the this position is a high salary position I in which I have to interact with the different type of the people at the different locations.

✓ In addition to this, this position is a high-salary position in which I have to interact with different types of people at different locations.

'High salary position' should be hyphenated as 'high-salary position'. Removed extra 'the' before 'different type'. 'Different type of the people' should be 'different types of people'. Removed unnecessary 'I'.