Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding hesitations and unclear phrases. Use simple, direct sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, clarify your job roles and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Ví dụ: I recently graduated and currently have two jobs. One is a remote position as a life sciences data creator, and the other is an on-site role as an R&D specialist at a biotech company.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, correct vocabulary and grammar will improve clarity.

Ví dụ: I work remotely as a life sciences data creator at Viva Systems, and I am also an R&D specialist at a biotech company called Albertine. I enjoy both roles because they let me apply the knowledge I gained during my undergraduate studies.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'also' or 'moreover' to connect ideas. Be specific about why the workplace is good.

Ví dụ: Yes, my remote job is great because I interact with people from different cultures who speak various languages. Moreover, it offers a highly competitive salary. My other job is also good as it allows me to apply my skills effectively.

Gợi ý: Good answer with clear structure and details. To improve, avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to use more varied vocabulary to express your feelings.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy my workplace because it is both productive and friendly. The atmosphere is supportive, and I feel comfortable communicating with my colleagues. Additionally, the office is well organized and quiet, which helps me focus on my tasks efficiently.

Gợi ý: Try to complete your sentences and avoid trailing off. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your plans. Also, clarify abbreviations like 'Bhd' for better understanding.

Ví dụ: My future work plans are not very clear yet. However, I plan to work for this year and then apply for postgraduate studies in a PhD program in chemistry to advance my career.

× I'm having two jobs, 1 remote and one on site.

✓ I have two jobs, one remote and one on site.

The verb 'having' is incorrectly used here; 'have' is the correct verb to express possession or holding jobs. Also, '1' should be spelled out as 'one' for clarity and formality.

× The remote 1 is as a life sciences data creator while the on the right one is as R&D specialist at the biotech company.

✓ The remote one is a life sciences data creator while the on-site one is an R&D specialist at a biotech company.

The phrase 'is as' is incorrect; it should be 'is a' to indicate the role. Also, 'on the right one' is unclear and likely meant to be 'on-site one'. 'Biotech company' should be preceded by an article 'a'.

× I work as a remote UH Life sciences data creator at Viva Systems while my workers and R&D specialist is at a BI tech company called Albertine.

✓ I work as a remote life sciences data creator at Viva Systems while my other job as an R&D specialist is at a biotech company called Albertine.

'My workers and R&D specialist' is incorrect; likely meant 'my other job as an R&D specialist'. 'UH' and 'BI tech' seem to be errors or typos and should be corrected to 'life sciences' and 'biotech'. Also, 'biotech company' needs an article 'a'.

× I actually enjoy both rules because they allow me to apply uh the knowledge I had in my undergraduate to apply it in.

✓ I actually enjoy both roles because they allow me to apply the knowledge I gained during my undergraduate studies.

'Rules' is incorrect; the correct word is 'roles'. Also, the sentence is redundant with 'to apply' twice and 'undergraduate' should be 'undergraduate studies'.

× Yes, in my remote work I deal with people from different cultures and they and they speak different languages as well.

✓ Yes, in my remote work I deal with people from different cultures who speak different languages as well.

The phrase 'and they and they' is repetitive and should be corrected to 'who'. This improves sentence flow and clarity.

× And just actually a good source of income because it provides a highly competitive salary, whereas already work also is good and it allows me to apply.

✓ It is actually a good source of income because it provides a highly competitive salary, whereas my other work is also good and allows me to apply my skills.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and unnecessary here. 'Already work' is incorrect; likely meant 'my other work'. The sentence structure is improved by removing 'just' and clarifying the roles.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

The question 'Would you like' implies a hypothetical or future preference, but the context suggests asking about current feelings, so 'Do you like' is more appropriate.

× The atmosphere is very supportive, and I feel comfortable communicating with my colleagues.

✓ The atmosphere is very supportive, and I feel comfortable communicating with my colleagues.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× The workplace itself is also well organized and quiet, which allows me to concentrate on the tasks efficiently, and I like that.

✓ The workplace itself is also well organized and quiet, which allows me to concentrate on tasks efficiently, and I like that.

The article 'the' before 'tasks' is unnecessary unless referring to specific tasks; removing it generalizes the statement appropriately.

× My future work plans are not clear at this moment. However, I think that I will be working for this year only because I plan to apply for a postgraduate studies and to get into a Bhd program in chemistry and this is actually for a career advancement and.

✓ My future work plans are not clear at this moment. However, I think that I will be working only for this year because I plan to apply for postgraduate studies and get into a PhD program in chemistry for career advancement.

'Will be working for this year only' is awkward; 'only for this year' is better. 'A postgraduate studies' is incorrect; 'postgraduate studies' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. 'Bhd' is likely a typo for 'PhD'. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.