Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。例如，“I recently lead”应为“I recently led”，“require”应为“required”，且句子结构略显混乱。建议注意时态一致性，句子结构清晰，避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: I work in project management, where I coordinate different teams and manage timelines to ensure projects are completed on time and within budget. For example, I recently led a software development project that required close collaboration between designers and developers, which I really enjoyed.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，内容具体且结构清晰。但“design and sales department”应为复数形式“departments”，且可以增加更多细节使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: I work at a small marketing company where I oversee multiple teams and manage project timelines. For example, I coordinate between the design and sales departments to ensure all tasks are completed on schedule and within budget. I really enjoy the challenge of balancing different priorities.

Gợi ý: 回答内容积极且结构合理，但最后一句不完整，缺少结尾。建议注意句子完整性，避免句子中断，同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Definitely yes, it is a great place to work because the atmosphere is very friendly and welcoming, which helps everyone feel comfortable sharing their ideas. For example, my colleagues and I communicate effectively, making teamwork easier and more productive. Additionally, since everyone works towards the same goal, the environment is very motivating.

Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容具体，但开头“Definitely yes.”显得有些简单，可以用更丰富的表达来增强回答的自然度和流畅性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would definitely like the place where I work. It has a pleasant atmosphere that is friendly and welcoming, which encourages everyone to share their ideas openly. For example, my colleagues and I collaborate effectively, making teamwork much easier and more productive.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，表达自然。但可以适当增加连接词使句子更连贯，同时注意“strategy, planning and risk management skills”前应加冠词。

Ví dụ: I aspire to take on more leadership roles in project management because I enjoy guiding teams and solving challenging problems. For example, I hope to lead larger teams and handle more complex projects so that I can enhance my strategy, planning, and risk management skills.

× For example, I recently lead a software development project that require close collaboration between designers and developers I enjoy.

✓ For example, I recently led a software development project that required close collaboration between designers and developers, which I enjoyed.

句中动词时态错误。'lead' 应为过去式 'led'，因为描述的是过去发生的事情；'require' 应为过去式 'required'，与主语 'project' 一致；句末缺少连接词，需加 'which' 连接从句。

× For example, I recently lead a software development project that require close collaboration between designers and developers I enjoy.

✓ For example, I recently led a software development project that required close collaboration between designers and developers, which I enjoyed.

同上，动词时态需统一为过去式，且句子结构需调整以表达完整意思。