Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语句不够连贯，有断句错误，且信息表达略显重复。建议注意句子完整性，避免断句错误，并且可以更自然地连接信息。

Ví dụ: I am currently a university student majoring in Electrical Engineering and Automation. I really enjoy learning about new technologies, and I hope to work in the IT industry after graduation.

Gợi ý: 回答没有直接回应问题，缺乏具体信息。建议直接回答问题，并提供简短的补充说明。

Ví dụ: I don't work at the moment because I am a full-time university student focusing on my studies.

Gợi ý: 回答重复且缺乏具体细节，表达不够丰富。建议避免重复，增加具体描述，使回答更有说服力。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to work because the environment is beautiful and comfortable, which helps me stay motivated.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和用词错误，如“offer”应为“office”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意词汇准确性和句子流畅性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy working there because the office is spacious and well-lit with natural light, which creates a pleasant atmosphere.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语气词过多，且年份错误。建议减少语气词，注意信息准确性，并使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I am currently a university student and will graduate next year, in 2027. After that, I plan to work in a field related to my major.

× Actually, I'm currently a university student majoring in. Electrical engineering and automation.

✓ Actually, I'm currently a university student majoring in Electrical Engineering and Automation.

句子中“majoring in.”后面不应有句号，且专业名称应连贯写出。句号导致句子结构不完整，影响表达。建议将句号去掉，使句子完整。

× Where do you work?>

✓ Where do you work?

句子末尾多了一个“>”符号，属于标点符号错误，影响句子结构和阅读。建议删除多余符号。

× And now I'm a university student.

✓ I am currently a university student.

句子开头使用“And”连接不当，且表达重复。建议去掉“And”，并用更自然的表达方式。

× Yes, I like enjoying work there because the offer is spacious and fair with natural light which makes the atmosphere very pleasant.

✓ Yes, I enjoy working there because the office is spacious and bright with natural light, which makes the atmosphere very pleasant.

“like enjoying work”表达不自然，应改为“enjoy working”。“offer”应为“office”。“fair”用来形容环境不合适，应为“bright”。建议使用正确词汇和表达。

× Uh, I'm current currently a university student.

✓ Uh, I'm currently a university student.

“current currently”重复，属于词语重复错误。建议保留“currently”，去掉“current”。

× Uh, after a year, uh, I will graduate in 20,027.

✓ Uh, after a year, I will graduate in 2027.

年份“20,027”写错，应为“2027”。数字中不应有逗号。建议正确书写年份。

× And so, uh, I want to work the place which is relevant to my major.

✓ And so, I want to work at a place that is relevant to my major.

缺少介词“at”，导致句子结构不完整。建议加上“at”使句子完整。