Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer provides relevant information but is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and grammatically correct by directly stating your job and experience, and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: I have been working as a personal support worker in a retirement home for the past three years. After completing my studies in this field, I started this job, which I find very rewarding because I help elderly people with their daily activities.

Gợi ý: Your answer gives good details but lacks fluency and has some hesitations. Try to organize your answer clearly and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I work in a retirement home located about 15 kilometers from my house. The building has seven stories, and I work on the fourth floor, which is the dementia and transitional care unit. The environment there is very clean and well-maintained.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to show contrast between your initial difficulty and current understanding.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to work. Although I found it difficult at first to communicate with mentally ill residents, I have since learned how to interact with them effectively, which has made my job more rewarding.

Gợi ý: Your answer provides some details but is somewhat disorganized and contains minor errors. Try to structure your response clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like the place where I work. It is a seven-story building, and I work on the clean and well-sanitized fourth floor. Additionally, there are clear signboards to help residents stay focused, which makes it a good working environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer communicates your future plans but is grammatically incorrect and somewhat repetitive. Try to express your goals clearly and use correct sentence structures.

Ví dụ: Currently, I work as a personal support worker, but in the future, I plan to become a registered nurse in retirement homes. To achieve this, I need to study and work hard.

× I work as a personal support worker in a retirement home from last three-year.

✓ I have worked as a personal support worker in a retirement home for the last three years.

The sentence refers to an action that started in the past and continues to the present, so the present perfect tense 'have worked' is appropriate. Also, 'from last three-year' is incorrect; it should be 'for the last three years' to indicate duration.

× Firstly I complete my study regarding this field and then I got a job in in a retirement home that's that's very good for me and I spend time with the old people and helping them in their daily living activities.

✓ Firstly, I completed my studies in this field and then I got a job in a retirement home, which is very good for me. I spend time with the elderly and help them with their daily living activities.

The actions 'complete' and 'got' happened in the past, so the past tense 'completed' is correct. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' when referring to education. 'Helping' should be 'help' to maintain parallel structure with 'spend time' and to use the base verb form after 'and'. Also, 'old people' is better expressed as 'the elderly' for politeness.

× I work in a retirement home. It's near about 15 kilometer from my, from my house and that, that place is very nice and clean.

✓ I work in a retirement home. It's about 15 kilometers from my house, and that place is very nice and clean.

The phrase 'near about' is incorrect; 'about' or 'approximately' is appropriate. 'Kilometer' should be plural 'kilometers' when the number is more than one. The phrase 'from my, from my house' is redundant; only one 'from my house' is needed.

× It's, uh, there's a seven story building and I work on the 4th floor that is dementia unit and uh, it's also a transitional unit, but is that?

✓ It's a seven-story building, and I work on the 4th floor, which is the dementia unit. It's also a transitional unit. Is that correct?

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Seven story' should be hyphenated as 'seven-story' when used as an adjective. 'That is dementia unit' should be 'which is the dementia unit' for clarity. The phrase 'but is that?' is unclear and corrected to 'Is that correct?' for proper questioning.

× When I visit first time. When I visited that place for the very first time, I found it quite difficult for me because I can't understand how to start and the how to talk with the people who are mentally ill.

✓ When I visited that place for the very first time, I found it quite difficult because I couldn't understand how to start and how to talk with people who are mentally ill.

The phrase 'When I visit first time' is incomplete and should be removed. 'Can't' should be past tense 'couldn't' to match the past context. 'The how to talk' is incorrect; 'how to talk' is sufficient. 'For me' is unnecessary and can be omitted.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

'Would you like' is used to ask about preferences or desires, often hypothetically. Since the question is about current feelings, 'Do you like' is more appropriate.

× Apart from it there is a all sign board so no one can distract from their goals so it's a good place.

✓ Apart from that, there are signs so no one can be distracted from their goals, so it's a good place.

'A all sign board' is incorrect; it should be 'there are signs' or 'there is a signboard'. Also, 'distract from their goals' should be 'be distracted from their goals' to use the passive form correctly.

× Now I'm working as a personal support worker, but in my future plans are I will be a registered nurse in the in the retirement homes that and for that future plans I had to I have to study hard and work hard for that so.

✓ Now I'm working as a personal support worker, but my future plan is to become a registered nurse in retirement homes. For that, I have to study hard and work hard.

The sentence is awkward and contains redundancy. 'In my future plans are I will be' is incorrect; it should be 'my future plan is to become'. 'Had to I have to' is incorrect; 'I have to' is correct. Also, 'in the in the retirement homes that' is redundant and unclear; simplified to 'in retirement homes'.