Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，避免重复和不必要的内容。

Ví dụ: I graduated in July and I am currently not working or studying. I am looking for a job now.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不连贯，语法和词汇使用错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确说明工作地点和职位职责，避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: I worked in Shenzhen, which is near Hong Kong. My job was in consumer growth, where I communicated with customers to encourage them to buy our products.

Gợi ý: 表达不清楚，逻辑混乱，词汇使用不当。建议明确表达观点，使用连接词使句子连贯，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I think the city is a good place to work, but my company is not ideal because the environment is stressful and not very supportive.

Gợi ý: 回答含糊不清，语法错误严重，缺乏具体细节。建议直接表达喜欢或不喜欢的理由，并提供具体细节支持观点。

Ví dụ: I do not like the place where I work because it is isolated with few buildings around, which makes it feel lonely.

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构重复，结尾不完整。建议使用多样句型，完整表达计划，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: My future plan is to work as a marketer in the high-tech industry. Therefore, I want to improve my English skills and gain more industry knowledge to help me succeed.

× Hammond work.

✓ I work at Hammond.

句子缺少主语和谓语的正确搭配，导致结构不完整。应补充主语“I”和介词短语“at Hammond”来表达工作地点。

× I graduated in this July and I had a job as I lay out now.

✓ I graduated this July and I have a job as I am working now.

“graduated”使用正确，但“had a job as I lay out now”时态混乱且表达不清，应使用现在完成时“have a job”及现在进行时“am working”来表达当前状态。

× So I'm not a student and I'm not work now.

✓ So I'm not a student and I'm not working now.

“I'm not work”中“work”应为动名词形式“working”，因为“am”后应接动词的现在分词形式。

× So that's a very complicated question, right?

✓ So that's a very complicated question, right?

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× I worked in Shenzhen, a sale near Hong Kong and I worked as a consumer growth, uh, I responsible for umm commi communicate to the waste consumers to encourage the the year buying.

✓ I worked in Shenzhen, a city near Hong Kong, and I worked in consumer growth. I was responsible for communicating with waste consumers to encourage their buying.

句子结构混乱，地名“a sale”应为“a city”，职位描述不清，“I responsible”缺少助动词，应为“I was responsible”，动词“commi communicate”拼写错误，应为“communicating”，且表达不完整。

× I think it's a good place, but my company is not a good place for work 'cause there is a very straightforward for me and it's more precious environment.

✓ I think it's a good place, but my company is not a good place to work because it is very stressful for me and it's a more competitive environment.

“for work”应为“to work”，表达目的；“there is a very straightforward”表达错误，应为“it is very stressful”；“precious environment”用词不当，应为“competitive environment”。

× Of course, I do not love the place I work.

✓ Of course, I do not love the place where I work.

缺少关系副词“where”引导定语从句，修饰“the place”。

× First of all, the year are always the most around the place, there is no any other buildings and what's more.

✓ First of all, there are always many people around the place, and there are no other buildings. What's more,

“the year are always the most”表达不清，应为“there are always many people”；“no any other buildings”中“no”和“any”不能同时使用，应选用“no other buildings”。

× First of all I want to work as a marketer in high tech industry, so first of all I want to improve my English skills.

✓ First of all, I want to work as a marketer in the high-tech industry, so I want to improve my English skills.

句子重复使用“first of all”，应避免重复；“high tech industry”应加定冠词“the”，且“high-tech”需连字符。

× Secondly I want to gain some industry knowledge and to help me to.

✓ Secondly, I want to gain some industry knowledge to help me.

句子不完整，“to help me to”后缺少内容，应删去多余的“to”并使句子完整。