Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence (I am working at the moment) and correct grammar (use present tense and proper job description). Avoid redundancy and unnecessary details. Use one or two supporting sentences with linking words to explain what you do and why you like it.

Ví dụ: I am currently working at a shop as a cashier. I finished my higher secondary school certificate recently, and this job helps me gain customer service experience, so I enjoy it.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating the place and your role. Use correct verb forms and combine related ideas with linking words (for example, 'and' or 'so') to make the response coherent. Give one specific example of tasks to make it more concrete.

Ví dụ: I work as a cashier at AK Pop Shop. Every day I handle payments and meet new customers, so the job has helped me improve my communication skills significantly.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer: start with a direct statement (Yes, it's a good place) and then give two clear supporting reasons. Avoid filler words and correct sentence structure (use articles and correct word order). Be specific about what you mean by 'architecture' or replace it with a clearer term (e.g. décor or layout).

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to work. The shop has excellent air-conditioning in summer and heaters in winter, so the working conditions are comfortable. Also, the shop's layout and décor are attractive, which makes the environment pleasant.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use correct grammar (subject–verb agreement and correct pronouns). Give one or two specific reasons (friendly colleagues, good pay) and avoid repetitive words. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas neatly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like working there because my colleagues and the owner are very friendly. Also, I earn a good salary each month, which makes the job more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence about your main plan (finish a degree). Use accurate phrases (e.g. 'I want to study management') and link steps with words like 'then' or 'after that'. Be specific about career goals (e.g. become a store manager) and avoid uncertainty words like 'maybe' unless necessary.

Ví dụ: My main plan is to finish a bachelor's degree in management. After that, I would like to work towards becoming a shop manager or store manager so I can use my education and my retail experience.

× Right now I finished my higher secondary school certificate, but currently I am working as a KF shop.

✓ Right now I have finished my higher secondary school certificate, but currently I am working at a KF shop.

The original uses simple past 'finished' with 'right now'/'currently', which requires present perfect to show a recent completed action with present relevance. Use 'have finished'. Also 'working as a KF shop' is incorrect—use 'working at a KF shop' or 'working in a KF shop' to indicate place. Suggestion: Use present perfect for recent completed actions connected to now and correct preposition for workplace.

× It's a nice place and I enjoy it.

✓ It's a nice place and I enjoy working there.

The verb 'enjoy' usually takes a gerund or an object; 'enjoy it' is vague here. Use 'enjoy working there' to clarify what is enjoyed and use 'there' for location. Suggestion: Use 'enjoy' + gerund to describe activities and 'there' for place.

× I am working at AK pop shop and I am a cashier and every day I introduce with new people.

✓ I am working at AK Pop shop and I am a cashier, and every day I meet new people.

'Introduce with new people' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'meet' for encountering people, or 'introduce myself to' if meaning to present oneself. Also capitalize 'Pop'. Suggestion: Use 'meet new people' or 'introduce myself to new people' as appropriate.

× It's a great experience for me and I improve my communication skills day by day.

✓ It's a great experience for me and I am improving my communication skills day by day.

Use present continuous ('am improving') to express an ongoing process. Simple present 'I improve' suggests habitual generality but 'day by day' implies a continuous improvement. Suggestion: Use present continuous for actions in progress.

× Yes, it's a nice place. Environment is excellent air condition in summertime and in cold time there have, uh, heater for, uh, heating the room.

✓ Yes, it's a nice place. The environment is excellent: there is air conditioning in summertime and in cold weather there is a heater for heating the room.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'environment'. 'Air condition' should be 'air conditioning'. Use 'there is' to introduce existence. 'In cold time' is unnatural; use 'in cold weather'. Replace 'there have' with 'there is'. Suggestion: Use 'there is/there are' for existence, correct nouns ('air conditioning'), and articles ('the environment').

× It's I enjoy it it and there have a lots of, uh, architecture.

✓ I enjoy it, and there is a lot of interesting architecture.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and repetitive. 'There have a lots of' is incorrect; use 'there is a lot of' or 'there are many'. 'Architecture' needs an adjective like 'interesting' to make sense. Suggestion: Simplify to clear clauses: 'I enjoy it, and there is a lot of interesting architecture.' Use 'a lot of' for uncountable/ plural nouns.

× Yes, I like this place because my colleague and the owner is very good and friendly.

✓ Yes, I like this place because my colleagues and the owner are very nice and friendly.

Subject 'my colleague and the owner' is plural and requires plural verb 'are'. Also use 'colleagues' if referring to more than one; 'good' is better as 'nice'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun number.

× I enjoyed it and I are a handsome money every month and the place is really really good.

✓ I enjoy it and I earn good money every month, and the place is really, really good.

'I are' is incorrect; subject 'I' needs 'earn' not 'are'. 'Handsome money' is nonstandard; use 'good money' or 'a good salary'. Use present simple 'I enjoy' for habitual fact. Suggestion: Use correct verb 'earn' and correct collocation 'good money'.

× Right now I'm working but I want to finish my bachelor degree.

✓ Right now I'm working, but I want to finish my bachelor's degree.

Use possessive form 'bachelor's degree'. Sentence tense is fine otherwise. Suggestion: Use correct noun form 'bachelor's degree'.

× My favorite subject will be maybe management.

✓ My favorite subject will probably be management.

'Will be maybe' is awkward. Use modal/adverb 'probably' to express likelihood. 'Favorite subject' with future 'will' is okay if talking about upcoming studies. Suggestion: Use adverb placement before main verb: 'will probably be'.

× So after I finish my bachelor degree from management so I would choose like manager or shop manager from different.

✓ So after I finish my bachelor's degree in management, I would choose a career as a manager or shop manager in different companies.

Original has redundant 'so', incorrect 'from management' (use 'in management'), and unclear 'from different'. Use 'a career as' and specify 'different companies' or 'different shops'. Suggestion: Remove redundant words, use 'in management', and make the object clear: 'a manager or shop manager in different companies'.