Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap doğrudan soruyu yanıtlıyor ancak dilbilgisi hataları, tekrarlamalar ve akıcılık problemleri var. Daha kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi kurun (örneğin “I’m currently not working; I’m preparing for the IELTS.”). Gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın, zaman ifadelerini düzgün kullanın ve prostetik öğeleri (çünkü/şu anda) bağlaçlarla bağlayın. Ayrıca mesleğinizi ve şu anki durumunuzu desteklemek için bir veya iki kısa ayrıntı ekleyin (ne kadar süredir çalışmadığınız veya hazırlığınızı nasıl yürüttüğünüz gibi).

Ví dụ: I’m currently not working because I am preparing for the IELTS exam. I graduated three years ago with a degree in graphic design, so right now I’m focusing on study and taking online practice tests to improve my skills.

Gợi ý: Cevap yine tekrarlı ve karışık; soruya doğrudan ve kısaca yanıt verin ("I don’t work at the moment"). Ek bilgi olarak çalıştığınız veya çalışmadığınız yerin türünü ve üyelik/katılım detayını net bir cümleyle açıklayın. Gereksiz ifadeleri çıkarın ve fiil zamanlarını düzeltin (do not work → don’t work; I purchased → I have bought).

Ví dụ: I don’t work at the moment. Instead, I’m studying at an office center where I have bought a monthly membership to use the quiet study area and facilities.

Gợi ý: Olumlu görüşü net söylediniz ama dil bilgisi ve kelime seçimi sorunlu. Kısa ve doğal bir konu cümlesi kurun, sonra neden sevdiğinizi iki kısa detayla destekleyin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak mantıklı akış sağlayın (for example, because, so). Doğru isim tamlamaları kullanın (silent area → quiet area; ensure → helps ensure).

Ví dụ: Yes, it’s a great place to work. The UH office centre has a quiet area, so I can concentrate well, and the personal desks help me organize my study materials efficiently.

Gợi ý: Cevap duyguyu ifade ediyor ama anlatımda belirsizlik ve tekrarlar var. "Would you like" sorusu tercihi/hoşlanmayı sorduğu için doğrudan "Yes, I do" ile başlayın. Sonra nedenini iki açık noktayla verin; örneğin kişisel masaların ve sessiz ortamın nasıl yardımcı olduğunu belirtin. Ayrıca son cümlede hangi hazırlıktan bahsettiğinizi netleştirin (IELTS preparation).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I like it because each person has a private table and the atmosphere is very quiet, which helps me focus on IELTS preparation and design work.

Gợi ý: Gelecek planlarını mantıklı sırayla verdiğiniz için iyi; ancak İngilizce yapı ve kelime kullanımı hatalı. Sıralama ifadelerini daha doğal kullanın (First, Then, Finally). "Go abroad for a master's" şeklinde doğru ifade edin. Kişi sayısı ve çoğul formlarını düzeltin (a new people → new people; new artist → new artists). Ayrıca her madde için kısa açıklama ekleyin (hangi ülkede/alanlarda master yapmayı düşündüğünüz, neden işbirliği yapmak istediğiniz).

Ví dụ: First, I plan to pass the IELTS exam. Then I want to go abroad to do a master’s degree in graphic design, and finally I hope to meet and collaborate with other artists to gain international experience.

× At the moment I I am not working anywhere.

✓ At the moment I am not working anywhere.

Duplicate 'I' is a typing error; remove the extra 'I'. The present continuous 'am not working' correctly expresses a current temporary situation. Suggestion: proofread to avoid repeated words.

× I graduated 3 years ago from university.

✓ I graduated three years ago from university.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but use words 'three' instead of '3' in formal speech/writing. Keep past simple 'graduated' for completed action. Suggestion: spell out small numbers in formal contexts.

× I am a graphic designer but I do not working anywhere because I am I prepared the IELTS exam nowadays cause.

✓ I am a graphic designer but I am not working anywhere because I am preparing for the IELTS exam these days.

'do not working' is incorrect because the auxiliary 'do' cannot be used with a continuous form; use 'am not working'. 'I am I prepared' mixes tenses; use present continuous 'am preparing' for ongoing actions. Replace 'nowadays cause' with 'these days' or 'right now' and include 'for' before 'the IELTS exam'. Suggestion: use 'am/are/is + verb-ing' for ongoing actions and include correct prepositions.

× I said I do not working anywhere.

✓ I said I am not working anywhere.

'do not working' is ungrammatical as explained above; after 'said' reporting a current situation, use present continuous 'am not working'. Suggestion: match reporting verb with correct tense for the reported statement.

× I prepared IELTS exam and the office center actually I, I purchased, I purchased the monthly joiner and participant actually.

✓ I am preparing for the IELTS exam and I actually joined an office center; I purchased a monthly membership.

'prepared IELTS exam' incorrectly uses past form; use 'preparing for' to indicate ongoing preparation. 'Monthly joiner and participant' is unclear; 'joined an office center' and 'purchased a monthly membership' are natural. Use gerund forms with 'preparing for'. Suggestion: use 'prepare for' + exam and 'join'/'purchase a membership' for activities.

× Yes, absolutely. I really working in the UH office centre because the silent area allocated ensure a more silent more focus on the working venue.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I really work in the UH office centre because the allocated silent area ensures a quieter, more focused working environment.

'I really working' lacks auxiliary 'am'; should be 'I really work' or 'I am really working' depending on meaning. 'allocated ensure' has subject-verb disagreement: 'area ensures' (singular subject requires 'ensures'). 'more silent more focus' is awkward; use 'quieter, more focused'. Suggestion: ensure correct auxiliary for continuous forms and subject-verb agreement for third person singular.

× Yes, I really love this place because the displays allocate a personal table and silent venue.

✓ Yes, I really love this place because they provide a personal table and a quiet space.

'displays allocate' is incorrect word choice and structure; use 'they provide' or 'the center provides'. 'silent venue' is unnatural; 'quiet space' is better. Also add articles 'a' where needed. Suggestion: choose correct verbs (provide) and use natural collocations.

× I I really focus on both preparing.

✓ I really focus on preparing for both.

Duplicate 'I' is an error. 'focus on both preparing' is unclear; specify what 'both' refers to (e.g., 'both the exam and my portfolio') or rephrase as 'focus on preparing for both'. Suggestion: remove duplicates and clarify the two items if mentioned.

× First of all, I will pass the IELTS exam.

✓ First of all, I will pass the IELTS exam.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Will pass' correctly expresses a future intention. No change needed. Suggestion: none.

× After that I will go to in abroad for the masters.

✓ After that I will go abroad for my master's degree.

'go to in abroad' has redundant prepositions; use 'go abroad'. 'the masters' should be 'my master's degree' or 'a master's program'. Suggestion: use correct preposition 'abroad' without 'to/in' and use possessive with 'master's degree'.

× Third of all, I want to meet a new people, new artist and I want to collaborate other artists.

✓ Thirdly, I want to meet new people and new artists, and I want to collaborate with other artists.

'a new people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and does not take 'a'. Use 'new people' without article. 'new artist' should be 'new artists' to match plural. Also 'collaborate other artists' requires the preposition 'with'. Suggestion: match singular/plural correctly and include 'with' after 'collaborate'.