Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarifiez et structurez votre réponse : commencez par une phrase nette indiquant si vous travaillez ou étudiez, puis donnez des détails précis sur vos études (matières, durée) et votre emploi actuel. Évitez les répétitions et les hésitations en préparant des expressions simples pour présenter votre parcours. Travaillez la prononciation des noms propres et des mots clés et pratiquez des phrases courtes et fluides pour réduire les pauses.

Ví dụ: I finished a degree in management and banking three years ago. Now I work in my family's small food business, where we sell various packaged food products.

Gợi ý: Donnez une réponse plus complète et spécifique : commencez par une phrase claire sur le lieu ou le type d'entreprise, puis ajoutez un détail sur votre rôle ou les produits. Utilisez un mot de liaison si vous ajoutez une seconde phrase. Évitez les réponses trop courtes en préparant deux phrases simples liées logiquement.

Ví dụ: I work with my family in our small food business. I help with sales and customer service at our local shop.

Gợi ý: Élargissez votre réponse avec des raisons précises : donnez au moins une ou deux raisons pour expliquer pourquoi l'endroit est agréable (ambiance, horaires, responsabilités). Utilisez une structure en deux phrases avec un lien logique (for example, because/so). Cela montrera la capacité à développer des idées.

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a good place to work because the atmosphere is friendly and the hours are flexible. This allows me to balance work with other commitments.

Gợi ý: Révisez complètement cette réponse pour la rendre claire et respectueuse : commencez par "Yes, I like it" puis donnez une raison simple et appropriée (par exemple, l'environnement, les horaires, la liberté). Évitez les mots inappropriés ou inintelligibles et pratiquez des phrases courtes sans hésitations. Préparez deux raisons brèves pour soutenir votre opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like working there because the environment is relaxed and I have flexible hours. I also enjoy working with my family, which makes the job pleasant.

Gợi ý: Donnez une réponse complète et structurée : commencez par une phrase directe sur votre objectif professionnel (par exemple, devenir cheffe d'entreprise), puis expliquez en une ou deux phrases comment vous comptez y parvenir (formation, expérience, projets). Utilisez des mots précis et évitez les hésitations; préparez un plan en trois phrases maximum.

Ví dụ: My future plan is to become a successful businesswoman. I hope to expand our family business and study entrepreneurship to improve my management skills. In the long term, I want to launch my own line of food products.

× I studied management, banking, banking. It's been three years since I finished my studied at Mulood mammary Tizzy would do now, uh, I work with my family. You have a small, uh, business of uh, product food, different product food. I'm uh.

✓ I studied management and banking. It's been three years since I finished my studies at Mulood Mammary Tizzy. Now, I work with my family. We have a small business selling different food products.

The original contains several errors: incorrect noun form 'studied' (should be the noun 'studies'), repetition, and unclear phrasing. Use 'It's been three years since I finished my studies' to indicate time elapsed using present perfect ('It's been') with a past event. Proper nouns should be capitalized and clarified. 'You have a small' is wrong pronoun; use 'We have a small business' to match subject. 'Product food' should be 'food products' (correct word order and plural). Suggestion: use correct noun forms, subject pronouns matching the speaker, and pluralize countable nouns when appropriate.

× With my family, we have small business.

✓ With my family, we have a small business.

Missing article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'small business'. In English, singular countable nouns generally require an article or determiner. Add 'a' to make the noun phrase grammatically correct.

× It's a good place to work.

✓ It's a good place to work.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. It correctly uses the definite article 'a' with 'place' and matches the question about whether the workplace is good.

× Yes, I like the blessed woman when I work because the it's not a ******* day.

✓ Yes, I like being at the workplace when I work because it's not a stressful day.

Original contains unclear phrase 'the blessed woman' which seems wrong; likely intended meaning is comfort at work. 'I like being at the workplace' uses the gerund after 'like'. Remove extraneous 'the' before 'it's'. Replace inappropriate word with 'stressful' for clarity. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct article usage.

× My future dream is to be a businesswoman. I want to. I. MMM.

✓ My future dream is to be a businesswoman. I want to run my own business.

The first sentence is fine. The fragmented 'I want to. I. MMM.' is incomplete. Complete the thought with an infinitive that expresses intention: 'I want to run my own business.' Use 'to' + verb for future intentions and provide a clear object.